Question

13．如圖反映了一種常見的現(xiàn)象：拖延癥（procrastination）．請寫一篇作文，內(nèi)容包括：
1．給procrastination下定義；
2．用生活中的例子談?wù)勀銓Υ爽F(xiàn)象的看法．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖畫作文，讓我們寫一篇關(guān)于拖延癥（procrastination）的作文，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語思維，將提供的信息用英語完整流暢的表達(dá)出來．寫作需要用第三人稱，時態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：給procrastination下定義；用生活中的例子談?wù)勀銓Υ爽F(xiàn)象的看法．我們此篇作文分為兩部分，第一部分為拖延癥的定義．第二部分為作者結(jié)合生活實(shí)例發(fā)表對拖延癥的看法．
重點(diǎn)短語與句型：
mean doing 意味著做…
because of  因?yàn)?br />when it comes to 當(dāng)談到，提到
rely on依靠，依賴
高分句型一：Although we've been constantly reminded that time and tide waits for no man，when it comes to the crux，we still procrastinate and complain so much．此句用了that引導(dǎo)賓語從句
高分句型二：And that is the reason why we are in a materialistic chase nowadays此句why引導(dǎo)定語從句，修飾 the reason．

解答 Procrastination means delaying huge and important deals on uncertain time because of out of understanding how we must  do it（拖延癥的定義）
I will do my homework tomorrow．That's a sentence many students will say at least once in their lifetime．Although we've been constantly reminded that time and tide waits for no man，when it comes to the crux，we still procrastinate and complain so much．（高分句型一）People are born to be lazy at times and the intrinsic motivation levels aren't high enough to warrant action．Thus，we rely on extrinsic motivation to help push us to complete the tasks we have on hand．And that is the reason why we are in a materialistic chase nowadays．（高分句型二）Because extrinsic motivation blinds our eyes to the intrinsic motivations that we should have．（作者結(jié)合生活實(shí)例發(fā)表對拖延癥的看法．）

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí) 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．