Question

【題目】假如你是李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Edward正在學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)，希望你推薦一個(gè)適合他學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)的網(wǎng)站。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容，給他回復(fù)郵件。

推薦網(wǎng)站：www.edchinese.com

網(wǎng)站內(nèi)容：

1. 網(wǎng)絡(luò)課程：中文情景對(duì)話、中國(guó)風(fēng)俗、中文電影、中文歌曲、成語(yǔ)和唐詩(shī)等；

2. 有在線教師答疑解惑。

注意： 1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

3. 開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Edward,

I’m more than pleased to know that you are learning Chinese. I’d like to recommend www. edchinese.com to you. ________________________________________________________________________________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Edward,

I’m more than pleased to know that you are learning Chinese. I’d like to recommend www.edchinese.com to you. It’s a good website for non-Chinese speakers who are learning Chinese, especially for beginners.

Firstly, it provides you with a variety of online courses, such as Chinese idioms, dialogues and customs. Through these courses, you will have a good understanding of the Chinese language as well as its culture. Besides, it will help you learn Chinese in interesting and effective ways. Here you can learn to sing some Chinese songs, enjoy Tang poems and watch Chinese movies. More importantly, there are teachers online whom you can turn to for help. And all this is free of charge.

I hope you will find this website attractive and helpful.

Wish you a happy learning time!

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：題干給出背景：你的英國(guó)朋友Edward正在學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)，希望你推薦一個(gè)適合他學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)的網(wǎng)站。文章要求給他回封郵件，給他推薦網(wǎng)站www.edchinese.com，并向他介紹網(wǎng)站的內(nèi)容以及優(yōu)點(diǎn)。成文時(shí)應(yīng)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：(1)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)齊全。 (2)人稱使用要恰當(dāng)。(3)時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。(4)適當(dāng)使用一些連詞和插入語(yǔ)，使文章自然、流暢。(5)恰當(dāng)使用一些高級(jí)詞匯和句型，以增加文章的檔次。根據(jù)題目的要求和我們上面提到的注意點(diǎn)，列出提綱：第一部分：寫作背景（知道他在學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)很高興，很樂(lè)意給他推薦網(wǎng)站）；第二段：推薦此網(wǎng)站的理由（用Firstly, Besides，More importantly使這部分層次清晰）；第三部分：結(jié)束語(yǔ)（希望網(wǎng)站對(duì)他有幫助并給他鼓勵(lì)）。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】

1.使用高級(jí)句型：多次使用定語(yǔ)從句It’s a good website for non-Chinese speakers who are learning Chinese, especially for beginners.；More importantly, there are teachers online whom you can turn to for help. ；賓語(yǔ)從句I hope you will find this website attractive and helpful.。2.使用了過(guò)渡詞語(yǔ)：Firstly, Besides，More importantly等。3.使用了重要短語(yǔ)：a variety of各種各樣的；as well as以及；turn to for help求助；free of charge免費(fèi)。