【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（/\），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1、每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2、只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分

I was taking a train to London’s Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people. Before long, a train inspector comes to check out tickets. A passenger realized he couldn’t find his ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, that was eventually found under a seat several rows from its owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success. No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet, they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.

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這是一篇記敘文。文章講述了作者乘火車(chē)去倫敦車(chē)站時(shí)，一名火車(chē)巡視員來(lái)查票。忽然，有一位乘客找不到他的車(chē)票了。于是，車(chē)廂的每個(gè)人都開(kāi)始幫他找票。最終，這張丟失的車(chē)票被找到了。

第一處：考查時(shí)態(tài)。描述過(guò)去發(fā)生的事情，用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，所以去掉had。

第二處：考查形容詞。這里作was后的表語(yǔ)，用形容詞，所以noise改成noisy。

第三處：考查時(shí)態(tài)。句意：不久以后，一名火車(chē)巡視員來(lái)查票。描述過(guò)去發(fā)生的事情，用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，所以comes改成came。

第四處：考查連詞。一名乘客意識(shí)到他找不到自己的票了，并且非常心煩。文中表示“并且”，是并列關(guān)系，所以but改成and。

第五處：考查固定短語(yǔ)。句意：然后，車(chē)廂的每個(gè)人都開(kāi)始尋找票。search for尋找，該短語(yǔ)是固定短語(yǔ)，所以search后面加for。

第六處：考查非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。which was eventually found under a seat several rows from its owner.作定語(yǔ)修飾the ticket，有逗號(hào)把主從句分開(kāi)，所以which was eventually found under a seat several rows from its owner.是一個(gè)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，關(guān)系詞在從句中作主語(yǔ)，指物，that不能引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，所以that改成which。

第七處：考查冠詞。句意：找到這張票的人對(duì)于他的成功露出了滿(mǎn)意的微笑。特指上文“丟失的那張票”，用定冠詞the。

第八處：考查副詞。先前，車(chē)廂中沒(méi)有人和他說(shuō)話(huà)，甚至沒(méi)有人注意到這位車(chē)票擁有者。修飾動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)spoken to，用副詞，所以previous改成 previously。

第九處：考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。句意：現(xiàn)在，他們很快為這位陌生人提供了幫助。文中“這位陌生人”是單數(shù)，所以strangers 改成stranger。

第十處：考查固定短語(yǔ)。句意：如果我們對(duì)處于困難中的其他人表示關(guān)心，這個(gè)世界將會(huì)變成更好的居住地。in need在困難中，該短語(yǔ)是固定短語(yǔ)，所以on改成in。

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