Question

16．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加，刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號 （∧）并在其下面寫出修改后的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（/）劃掉．
修改：在錯詞后劃一橫線并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及修改均僅限一詞．
   2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
My soccer coach retired in last week．I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party．My mum makes the better biscuits in the world，so I decide to ask her for help．Mum taught me some basic step of baking．I insisted on doing most of the baking myself．I thought the biscuits were really well．My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up．
At a party，my coach，with a biscuit in his mouth，asked surprisingly who made them and joked，"I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits．"
My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!

Answer 1

分析 本文主要講述作者的教練退休了，在退休聚會上作者送給教練自己親手烘焙的餅干．教練非常高興．

解答 My soccer coach retired in last week．I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party．My mum makes the better biscuits in the world，so I decideto ask her for help．Mum taught me some basic stepof baking．I insisted on doing most of the baking myself．I thought the biscuits were really well．My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up．
At aparty，my coach，with a biscuit in his mouth，asked surprisingly who made them and joked，"I might have to retire again next year just∧get some more of these biscuits．"
My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!
詳解：
1．去掉in 考查介詞．last week作時間狀語時，其前不加介詞．
2．a(chǎn)nything改為something 考查代詞．肯定句中用something，anything用于否定句或疑問句．
3．better改為best 考查形容詞．the應(yīng)用在形容詞最高級前．
4．decide改為decided 考查動詞時態(tài)．全文講述過去的事情，應(yīng)用一般過去時．
5．step改為steps 考查名詞．step是可數(shù)名詞，其前有some修飾時，用復(fù)數(shù)steps．
6．well改為good 考查形容詞． be動詞后接形容詞good，well作形容同時，意為"健康的"．
7．a(chǎn)fter改為when/while 考查連詞．此處意為"當(dāng)„„時候"．
8．a(chǎn)改為the 考查冠詞．party是第二次出現(xiàn)，應(yīng)用定冠詞the．
9．加to 考查動詞不定式．根據(jù)句意：我可能明年要再退休一次，只是想得到更多這樣的餅干．此處為不定式作目的狀語．
10．enjoy改為enjoying 考查動名詞．介詞of后應(yīng)用動名詞enjoying．

點(diǎn)評 高考短文改錯題的形式有說明文，短文故事，書信等，具有很強(qiáng)的實(shí)用性．短文的內(nèi)容和語言都符合高中學(xué)生的實(shí)際，從表面上看類似一篇學(xué)生習(xí)作．首先，通讀全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的時態(tài)、人稱及行文邏輯，在通讀全文時把一些容易的錯誤先改好，再進(jìn)行逐句改錯．其次，要進(jìn)行逐個句子的改錯．這是要對文中的詞法、句法和語篇著重分析和特別注意．最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍，檢查答案是否正確，感覺是否還有不妥之處，最終形成定稿．