Question

6．第一節(jié)　基礎(chǔ)寫作（共1小題，滿分15分）
請依據(jù)以下信息，為英語校報寫篇短文，介紹你（劉芳）參加"社會實踐活動"的情況．
【寫作內(nèi)容】
假定你是李華，正在英國接受英語培訓(xùn)，住在一戶英國人家里．今天你的房東 Mrs Wilson不在家，你準(zhǔn)備外出，請給Mrs Wilson寫一留言條，內(nèi)容包括：
1．外出購物
2．替房東還書
3．Tracy來電留言：
1）咖啡屋（Bolton Coffee）見面取消
2）此事已告知Susan
3）盡快回電
注意：1．詞數(shù)100字左右；
2，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．

【寫作要求】
只能使用5個句子表達(dá)全部內(nèi)容．
【評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】
句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
To enrich my social life，gain more experience and inspire me to study harder，I participated in the activity，working in a Xinhua Bookstore for more than 10 days during the winter vocation．
高分句型二：
The work made me really tired，which helps me realize that it's not easy for our parents to earn money．
句型一 ①To enrich my social life 此處使用了不定式位于句首作目的狀語
           ②working in a Xinhua Bookstore for more than…此處使用了現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語，同時表該動作為主動
句型二 which helps me realize that it's not easy for our parents…該句是一個由which作引導(dǎo)詞的非限制性定語從句，which在句中充當(dāng)主語，替代前面出現(xiàn)的先行詞work

解答 I'm Liu Fang，a Senior Three student aged 18，and I'd like to share my social practice experience with you．To enrich my social life，gain more experience and inspire me to study harder，I participated in the activity，working in a Xinhua Bookstore for more than 10 days during the winter vocation．（高分句型一）（表明目的）There，I mainly did some cleaning，put the books in order and introduced books to customers and I also helped the salesmen sell books 8 hours a day．The work made me really tired，which helps me realize that it's not easy for our parents to earn money．（高分句型二）Meanwhile，I have also learned how to communicate with different customers，which has built up my confidence．

點評 本書面表達(dá)為提綱類，此類作文要點明確，規(guī)定了考生的表述思路，寫作時要根據(jù)提示，緊密結(jié)合提示展開敘述，語言使用準(zhǔn)確，簡潔明了的表達(dá)．