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【題目】假如你是李華。你校學(xué)生會正舉辦一場以“The Power of Smile”為主題的英文演講比賽。你想?yún)⒓哟嘶顒印Ｕ埬阋源藶轭}，寫一篇英文演講稿，介紹現(xiàn)實生活中人們對待“微笑”的態(tài)度以及“微笑”的力量，并建議大家生活中多點微笑多點快樂。

注意： 1.詞數(shù)：100左右；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Answer 1

【答案】

The Power of Smile

In today’s modern society, people’s life and work are getting more and more stressful, which results in cold and serious faces everywhere, without smile. With kinds of heavy burden from their life, they even forget such excellent nature they were born with ---smile. As a result, the society now is full of indifference and coldness.

Nevertherless, smile can serve as the sunshine in winter that can warm the people living under the tough world. First of all, it is the best way to show your good image. Imagine that you go for an interview with a confident smile. It surely give you power to perform well. Besides, smile can erase one’s anger or any other negative feeling. It is said that smile before you get upset and you will achieve everything. Last but not least, by smiling to everyone, no matter who he is and how important he is to you, you will find your friends everywhere, which can be something valuable in the journey of your life.

Therefore, remember to smile everyday. Always smile, always be lucky!

【解析】

試題分析：英語演講稿是近年來比較喜歡出現(xiàn)在在英語書面表達中的一種形式，遇到演講稿這類作文題，認(rèn)真研究所給提綱不能遺漏提綱要點，更不能錯誤理解提綱的意思。確定各段的主題句，主題句結(jié)構(gòu)要完整，即結(jié)構(gòu)符合語法規(guī)則；意義要完整，即主題句是一個符合邏輯的完整句子。段落寫作應(yīng)圍繞自己列好的主題句進行，在寫作過程中可稍加調(diào)整。要符合演講的語氣，要注意動詞的時態(tài)及主語的人稱。

【亮點說明】文章使用了很好的短語和句子：be born with生來具有，As a result，is full of ，serve as，erase消除，which results in cold and serious faces everywhere定語從句，smile can serve as the sunshine in winter that can warm the people living under the tough world運用了比喻的手法，no matter who he is and how important he is to you是條件狀語從句，which can be something valuable in the journey of your life定語從句。文章使用了過度性的連接詞First of all，Besides，Last but not least等，使得文章條理清晰明了。