Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你班交換生 Jim 因“新冠”肺炎的原因無法返校，來信向你咨詢學(xué)習(xí)事宜。請(qǐng)你給他寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.開學(xué)日期推遲；

2.學(xué)校輔導(dǎo)（在線教育、心理……）；

3.如有調(diào)整，及時(shí)通知。

注意: 1.字?jǐn)?shù) 100 左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使文章行文連貫。

參考詞匯：新型冠狀病毒 novel coronavirus; 心理的 psychological

Dear Jim,

I hope everything goes well with you.

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Yours truly,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

I hope everything goes well with you. It’s a pity that you can’t return to school because of the outbreak of the novel coronavirus. I’m writing to tell you more about it.

Prevention and control of the virus is the top priority (優(yōu)先) at present. The opening date of the new term has to be postponed (推遲). All the students are not allowed to go to school. Online education, including online psychological guidance, will be provided during the absence from school. By the way, it wouldn’t be better if you could work out regularly at home and keep healthy. Only by doing so can you get your immune system (免疫系統(tǒng)) strengthened. If there is any adjustment, I will keep you informed ahead of time. Please take it lightly.

Willingly, I’ll give you my helping hand whenever you need it! Wish you good luck!

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫一封信給你班交換生Jim，回復(fù)他因?yàn)?/span>“新冠”肺炎的原因無法返校之后的學(xué)習(xí)事宜，要求寫明開學(xué)日期推遲、學(xué)校輔導(dǎo)情況等。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求：1. 開學(xué)日期推遲；

2. 學(xué)校輔導(dǎo)（在線教育、心理……）；

3. 學(xué)校有調(diào)整會(huì)及時(shí)通知。

第二步:列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）

It’s a pity that +從句；novel coronavirus；postpone；online psychological guidance；only by doing +（部分）倒裝句；immune system; ahead of time

第三步：連詞成句

1. It’s a pity that you can’t return to school because of the outbreak of the novel coronavirus.

2. The opening date of the new term has to be postponed (推遲).

3. Online education, including online psychological guidance, will be provided during the absence from school.

4. Only by doing so can you get your immune system (免疫系統(tǒng)) strengthened.

5. I will keep you informed ahead of time.

(根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。）

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause(從句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

5表換一種方式表達(dá)：In other words, that is to say,

6.表進(jìn)行舉例說明：For example; For instance; such as + n/doing

7.表 陳 述 事 實(shí)：In fact, frankly speaking

8.表選擇：either…or…，or

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤(rùn)色修改