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4．假設你是李華，你的英國朋友Jack對你們學校最近開展的"書香校園"活動很感興趣．請你用英語給他寫一封信，內容包括：
1．"書香校園"活動開展的情況；
2．你對該活動的看法．
注意：1．詞數100字左右，開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數；
2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
書香校園：Scholarly Campus
Dear Jack，
    I'm glad that you are interested in the Scholarly Campus activity in our school．I'm eager to tell you something about it．
Recently our school has held the Scholarly Campus activity with the aim of encouraging us students to read more books．（高分句型一）We have conducted several activities，such as holding class meetings about books，opening reading clubs，sharing reading experiences and so on．（高分句型二）Now the concept of Scholarly Campus is so well-received that you can find students read books all over the campus．（高分句型三）
As for me，I'm more than happy to join in the activity．Not only does it arouse students'interest in reading，but it also cultivates students'love for knowledge and，more importantly，for life．I'm sure it will bring benefits for students．
Wish you all the best!
Yours，
Li Hua

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據提示信息針對英國朋友Jack對你們學校最近開展的"書香校園"活動很感興趣．請你用英語給他寫一封信，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點："書香校園"活動開展的情況；你對該活動的看法．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應該用一般現在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：be eager to渴望去做；with the aim of 有…的目的；As for 至于，關于；more than非常；not only，but also不僅，而且；
Recently our school has held the Scholarly Campus activity with the aim of encouraging us students to read more books．（高分句型一）
We have conducted several activities，such as holding class meetings about books，opening reading clubs，sharing reading experiences and so on．（高分句型二）
Now the concept of Scholarly Campus is so well-received that you can find students read books all over the campus．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Jack，
     I'm glad that you are interested in the Scholarly Campus activity in our school．I'm eager to tell you something about it．
     Recently our school has held the Scholarly Campus activity with the aim of encouraging us students to read more books．（高分句型一）We have conducted several activities，such as holding class meetings about books，opening reading clubs，sharing reading experiences and so on．（高分句型二）Now the concept of Scholarly Campus is so well-received that you can find students read books all over the campus．（高分句型三）
     As for me，I'm more than happy to join in the activity．Not only does it arouse students'interest in reading，but it also cultivates students'love for knowledge and，more importantly，for life．I'm sure it will bring benefits for students．
     Wish you all the best!
                                                                                                                                                                                                                      Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                      Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．