【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

The best advice I received in my childhood was from my dad. He always gives me some advice, but I seldom took them seriously. One day he was encouraged me to participate in a speech competition. So I signed up and after the competition, I did my best to be full prepared. But the moment I stood on the stage, I was such nervous that my mind completely went blank. The experience of lose a competition was really painful. Then, my dad said, “My son, life is like battlefield. You have to lose many time to win the final victory.” Thanks for his advice, I never give up when I do anything.

【答案】

【1】gives→gave

【2】them→it

【3】去掉was

【4】after→before

【5】full→fully

【6】such→so

【7】lose→losing

【8】like后面加a

【9】time→times

【10】for→to

【解析】

試題分析：作者童年時(shí)父親在一次作者演講失敗后給作者建議不要害怕失敗，人生要到達(dá)最后成功之前要有很多次的失敗。作者聽(tīng)從了父親的建議，做任何事情時(shí)都從來(lái)不放棄。

【1】gives→gave 根據(jù)上文可知，講的是童年的故事，用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，故把gives改成gave。

【2】them→it 因?yàn)閍dvice是不可數(shù)名詞，故把them改成it。

【3】去掉was 句意：一天他鼓勵(lì)我參加演講比賽。此處是主動(dòng)形式，故去掉was。

【4】after→before 句意：比賽前我盡最大努力做好充分準(zhǔn)備。故把a(bǔ)fter改成before。

【5】full→fully 副詞修飾過(guò)去分詞，故把full改成fully。

【6】such→so so...that...如此……以至于……，故把such改成so。

【7】lose→losing 介詞后面用動(dòng)名詞形式，故把lose改成losing。

【8】like后面加a 句意：生活就像一個(gè)戰(zhàn)場(chǎng)。故在like后面加a。

【9】time→times many后面跟可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)，而且time在這里表示“次數(shù)”，是可數(shù)名詞，故把time改成times。

【10】for→to 此處的意思是：多虧了……。故把thanks for改成thanks to。

【知識(shí)歸納】

so,such用法的區(qū)別

兩者都可以表示“這樣”，“如此”的意思。

(1)so是副詞，用來(lái)修飾形容詞或副詞。例如:I am so glad to hear from my friend.收到我朋友的信我真高興。

(2)such是形容詞，用來(lái)修飾名詞(名詞前面可以帶形容詞，也可以不帶)。如果修飾單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞，其后需加不定冠詞a或an.例如:

He told us such a funny story.

他給我們講了一個(gè)這么有趣的故事。

注意：當(dāng)單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞前面有形容詞修飾時(shí)，也可以用so,但要改變冠詞的位置。例如:He told us so funny a story.

巧記so和such的用法

名前such,形，副so，多多少少也用so.

little屬特殊，“小”用such,“少”用so.

說(shuō)明：a.當(dāng)名詞前有many, much, few和little等詞修飾時(shí)，要用so而不用such.如:

I have had so many falls that I'm black and blue all over.我摔了很多跤，以致全身青一塊紫一塊的。There is so little time that we can't finish work on time.只有這么少的時(shí)間，我們無(wú)法按時(shí)完成工作。

b.當(dāng)little作“小的”講，修飾名詞時(shí)，其前面仍須用such,而不用so.如:

They are such little children that they can't do anything.這些孩子太小了，無(wú)法做任何事情。

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