Question

假定你是星光中學的高中畢業(yè)生李華，母校將為高一新生舉辦主題為“What to learn in senior high school?”的英語沙龍活動，特邀請你結合自身經(jīng)歷談談自己的體會。請根據(jù)以下提示準備一份英語發(fā)言稿。
1.學會學習：方法，習慣等；
2.學會做人：真誠，友善；
3.學會其他：考生自擬。
注意：1.詞數(shù)120左右；
2.發(fā)言稿開頭和結尾已給出，不須抄在答題卡上，不計入總次數(shù)。
Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.
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Thank you!

Answer 1

Good morning, everyone! It is my honour to be here to share with my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.
In the coming three years, our school life will be challenging. First, we should learn to learn efficiently. Personally, I used to try effective method to achieve my academic goals. Developing a good habit is also of importance. It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class.
In addition, we should learn how to get along well with others. In school, I respected teachers and was friendly with classmates. It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.
Finally, we should take part in sports and outdoors activities frequently. They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.
No pains no gains. I am sure that with great efforts, you will enjoy a colorful and fruitful life here.
Thank you!

解析【題型分析】
今年江西高考英語書面表達屬于演講稿寫作。給予提綱，半自由半開放類。與學生實際生活十分貼切。讓學生有話可說，但要得高分必須有深度的思想以及就話題語言靈活運用能力。即要能在清晰的框架內在語言和內容方面寫出自己的特色。
【審題要素】
寫作時需注意下列幾點。
1. 應該使用第一人稱。全文以現(xiàn)在以及將來范疇的時態(tài)為主，當然不排斥用過去時態(tài)。
2. 按提綱提示清晰分段，不能缺少要點（學會學習：方法，習慣等；學會做人：真誠；友善；學會其他）。
3.注意語言邏輯性和思維想象力。多用些語際銜接性詞語（first of all ，besides ，on the one hand 等）。
【思路導引】
首先， 思考出要學會學習，要有個符合自己的方法，要養(yǎng)成良好的學習習慣，要有個正確的學習態(tài)度等；思考出要學會做人，要與人和善，要和睦相處，要正氣真誠等；當然還要學會鍛煉，學會娛樂，學會自我管理等。
然后，根據(jù)要點思考可用哪些表達法：the best way of .../ an acceptable thing is .../get into a habit of .../be active in..../go over.../behave well/it is kind of .../be involved in...等；根據(jù)提綱，連成句子，清晰分段�？捎胒irstly.../in addition.../last but not the least等。
最后，雖然試卷給出了演講開頭，但我們別忘了在演講稿結尾時，或總結，或展望未來，或表決心等。
【亮點說明】

重點 詞匯 語句	Challenging，used to             In addition build up                        Develop a good habit get actively involved in            No pains no gains. get along well with ...
高級 句型	1. Developing a good habit is also of importance. （動名詞短語作主語） 2. ...review what had been taught after class. （名詞性從句） 3. It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere. （強調句） 4. I am sure that with great efforts, you will... （名詞性從句） ...
段落 框架	First,... In addition,... Finally,...