Question

假設(shè)你是高中生李華，對于校園中存在的亂丟垃圾（to litter）以及部分學(xué)生抽煙的不良行為，請你用英語給校長寫一封100---120個詞的信。信中應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容。
1．說明寫信目的；
2．對這些行為進(jìn)行批評；
3．提出建議。
注意：信的開頭、落款及信的第一句已給出（不記詞數(shù)）。
Sep 20,2012
Dear Mr. Headmaster,
I am Li Hua, a student from Class 1, Senior 3. ________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Sep 20,2012
Dear Mr. Headmaster,
I am Li Hua, a student from Class 1, Senior 3. I am writing to draw your attention to some improper behaviour among some students: littering and smoking. It makes our school dirty and unpleasant, and does harm to the image of our school. Moreover, as teenagers, we shouldn't smoke. Smoking is harmful to our health. It is clearly not appropriate for a student to litter and smoking. I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around and set up specific rules against such behaviour. At the same time, students should be encouraged to develop good habits and better behave themselves. I believe that, with the joint efforts of both teachers and students, our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future. Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

本文是一篇對生活中存在的亂扔垃圾等不良現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行批評的半開放性作文，文章只是給出一個綱要，需要考生去添加和整理，給考生留的空間比較大，在寫作的目的上可以寫是為了營造一個更好的生活環(huán)境，同時批評這些行為。最關(guān)鍵的是提出的建議，要加強(qiáng)教育宣傳的力度，要大家共同努力。在寫作的時候要注意使用高級詞匯，合適的連接詞和高級的句型讓文章更有文采更流暢。