Question

短文改錯(cuò)
     假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文
中共有十處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
     增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（^），并在該詞下面寫出該加的詞。
     刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
     修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
     注意：
           1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
           2.只允許修改十處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
    Great changes have been taken place in the way people communicate with each other. In the
past people write letters to share informations and later they talked with each other in the telephone.
Now more and more people use our own mobile phones to communicating. And instead writing on
the paper, they e-mail each other on the computer. As a result, people find that quicker and easier
to communicate, and at the same time some people feel that they become poorer in writing. They
worry about whether people can be as closely as before.
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Answer 1

      Great changes have been taken place in the way people communicate with each other.
                                 1. 去掉
In the past people write letters to share informations and later they talked with each other
                        2. wrote                    3. information
in the telephone. Now more and more people use our own mobile phones to communicating.
4. on                                                                 5. their                             6.  communicate  
And instead∧ writing on the paper, they e-mail each other on the computer. As a result, people 
                7. of
find that quicker and easier to communicate, and at the same time some people feel that they
       8. it                                                     9. but
become poorer in writing. They worry about whether people can be as closely as before.
                                                                                                            10. close