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【題目】假如你是四川省雙流中學(xué)高三（4）班的班長(zhǎng)李華，你班上的同學(xué)張明將要留學(xué)去澳大利亞的學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示用英文寫一封推薦信。

要點(diǎn)提示：

1.你的身份；

2.你對(duì)張明的印象，如在校期間的學(xué)習(xí)情況，表現(xiàn)等；

3.說(shuō)明張明適合去該校留學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)。

注意：1.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

2.詞數(shù)不少于100。

3.信得開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Sir/Madam,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir / Madam,

I am honored to recommend Zhang Ming to you, as he wants to apply to your school.

As the monitor in our class, I am quite familiar with Zhang Ming. We have been classmates for more than two years. He has given me a good impression. Firstly, not only is he intelligent, but also he is hard-working. He does well in most subjects and is one of the best students in our school. Our teachers all like him and encourage us to follow his example. Secondly, having talents in other things, such as singing and debating, he has helped to organize several class activities. Besides, he is also caring and lively. He is always ready to help classmates, and he spreads happiness wherever he goes.

I know he will meet your school’s requirements. If he is admitted into your school, I am sure he will perform even better in your school.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】本文屬于提綱類作文，要求寫一封推薦信。要注意書信的格式和特殊用詞�？紤]用用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)來(lái)寫。要點(diǎn)：1.你的身份；2.你對(duì)張明的印象，如在校期間的學(xué)習(xí)情況，表現(xiàn)等；3.說(shuō)明張明適合去該校留學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)。這篇文章對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開(kāi)頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本篇書面表達(dá)要點(diǎn)全面，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，是一篇較好的范文。這篇短文使用了大量的短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如: be familiar with對(duì)……熟悉，do well in在……某方面干得好。還使用了倒裝，Firstly, not only is he intelligent, but also he is hard-working.和賓語(yǔ)從句I know he will meet your school’s requirements.等多種句式結(jié)構(gòu)，增加了文章的可讀性。