Question

8．Dear Sir，
I'm glad to learn that part-time assistants were wanted in your studio and I'd like to have a try．I'm a student who is graduated from high school soon．Before attending the college，I'll have a long holiday and I'm determined to make the best of them．Since childhood，I have developed a strong interest in storytelling and watching films．My teacher thinks high of my performance in the language class，when I have also acquired a good knowledge of American movie industry．Except that，I am monitor of my class and thus have gained many experience in management．
I will undertake full responsibility and spare no effort to do my share of work．I am fully convinced that through communication with the staffs，I can get some valuable work experience as well as develop my social skills．
I'm looking forward to receiving your reply soon．Thank you for your consider．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封求職信．作者馬上就要高中畢業(yè)了，他想在假期做兼職，希望能夠在工作中獲得一些工作經(jīng)驗，培養(yǎng)自己的社交能力．

解答 Dear Sir，
I'm glad to learn that part-time assistants were wanted in your studio and I'd like to have a try．I'm a student who is graduated from high school soon．Before attending the college，I'll have a long holiday and I'm determined to make the best of them．Since childhood，I have developed a strong interest in storytelling and watching films．My teacher thinks high of my performance in the language class，when I have also acquired a good knowledge of American movie industry．Except that，I am monitor of my class and thus have gained many experience in management．
I will undertake full responsibility and spare no effort to do my share of work．I am fully convinced that through communication with the staffs，I can get some valuable work experience as well as develop my social skills．
I'm looking forward to receiving your reply soon．Thank you for your consider．
Yours，
Li Hua．
詳解：
1．were改為are；時態(tài)錯誤．句意表達的是說話時的事實，要用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．
2．graduated改為graduating；分詞錯誤．句中graduate與主語I構成主謂關系，要用表示主動的現(xiàn)在分詞和系動詞一起構成進行時態(tài)．
3．the去掉；冠詞錯誤．a(chǎn)ttend college上大學，固定短語．
4．them改為it；邏輯指代錯誤．句意指代的是前面提到的holiday，要用it來指代．
5．high改為highly；副詞錯誤．句中high修飾動詞think，要用副詞形式．
6．when改為where；連詞錯誤．句中I have also acquired a good knowledge of American movie industry修飾名詞class，是一個定語從句；先行詞class表示抽象地點，要用where來引導．
7．Except改為Besides；介詞錯誤．句意表達的是除了…還有，要用besides來表示；except表示除了…之外就沒有了．
8．many改為much；形容詞錯誤．句中experience是不可數(shù)名詞，要用much來修飾．
9．staffs改為staff；名詞錯誤．staff本身就是復數(shù)，表示全體職員．
10．consider改為consideration；名詞錯誤．句中consider作介詞for的賓語，要用名詞形式．

點評 短文改錯題考查的是語境理解能力和用法基礎知識．�？嫉闹�識點有：名詞（單復數(shù)錯誤），動詞（時態(tài)，語態(tài)，搭配，轉換），代詞（指代錯誤），形容詞和副詞（轉換，比較等級），連詞（and，but，or）等．偶爾也會考查邏輯錯誤，如本來用her，卻用了his等等．解題是要注意：以句子為單位，以動詞為中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的錯誤；找錯誤要以動詞為主，動詞或與動詞有關的錯誤占了改錯的題的重要一部分．