Question

作為中學(xué)生，你肯定經(jīng)歷過(guò)多次考試，體驗(yàn)過(guò)成功，也遭遇過(guò)失敗。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，以Different Attitudes Towards Failure in Exams 為題，簡(jiǎn)要概述中學(xué)生普遍存在的對(duì)考試失敗的兩種態(tài)度，并結(jié)合自身實(shí)際，說(shuō)明你的觀點(diǎn)。

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參考詞匯：分析原因  analyze the cause

Different Attitudes Towards Failure in Exams

  Failure in exams is such a common thing that every student has suffered from it. Different students have different attitudes to failure.

                                                                               

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 Different Attitudes Towards Failure in Exams

  Failure in exams is such a common thing that every student has suffered from it. Different students have different attitudes to failure. Some students feel so disappointed at their poor performance in exams that they have fear and anxiety about exams. Even worse, they may lose heart and give up.

  However, others regard failure as part of the process towards their final goal, taking an active attitude towards failure. Not only do they encourage themselves to be self-confident but they also find out and analyze the causes so that they will no longer make similar mistakes.

  As we all know, failure is the mother of success. Even great men may have failed many times before they finally succeed. In other words, failure can teach us more than success does. We need to have s good state of mind to face challenges in our future life.

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于正反觀點(diǎn)類議論文，討論的話題是中學(xué)生對(duì)待失敗態(tài)度。本題材上來(lái)說(shuō)屬于議論文，所以使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要以第三人稱為主，在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，使用第一人稱。要點(diǎn)：1.人人都經(jīng)歷過(guò)成功和失敗，但是不同的人對(duì)待失敗有不同的觀點(diǎn)。2. 當(dāng)考試沒(méi)有取得理想成績(jī)時(shí)，有些人感覺(jué)失望，喪失信心，不再繼續(xù)努力。3. 當(dāng)考試失敗時(shí)，有些人分析并找出失敗的原因，鼓勵(lì)自己，增強(qiáng)自信，避免再犯同樣的錯(cuò)誤。4.你的觀點(diǎn)：失敗乃成功之母。我們要從失敗中得出教訓(xùn)，完善自我，取得更大的進(jìn)步。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】：本文最大的特殊就是高級(jí)句式的運(yùn)用。如Not only do they encourage themselves to be self-confident but they also find out and analyze the causes so that they will no longer make similar mistakes.中not only后面接的部分倒裝句的形式。As we all know, failure is the mother of success.中as引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，以及諺語(yǔ)failure is the mother of success。

考點(diǎn)：考察正反觀點(diǎn)類短文