Question

假若你是某高中學(xué)生李華，進(jìn)入高中后，你覺(jué)得學(xué)英語(yǔ)的方式與初中有很大的不同。你給自己的英語(yǔ)老師寫(xiě)了一封信，講述自己的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)情況。信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
【寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容】
1、開(kāi)始學(xué)習(xí)高中英語(yǔ)時(shí)，覺(jué)得英語(yǔ)比以前要難得多，幾乎喪失信心；
2、后來(lái)逐漸意識(shí)到英語(yǔ)的重要性；
3、每天努力學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)，例如多讀書(shū)，多背誦等；
4、向老師和同學(xué)請(qǐng)教更好的學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的方法；
5、正是他們的幫助和您的鼓勵(lì)使我提高了英語(yǔ)水平，現(xiàn)在對(duì)英語(yǔ)越來(lái)越感興趣。
【寫(xiě)作要求】
1、字?jǐn)?shù)在80—100；
2、參考詞匯：①高中英語(yǔ)：senior English；②喪失信心：lose heart；③意識(shí)到：realize；④背誦：recite；          ⑤鼓勵(lì)：encouragement
Dear Mr. Li,
I’m glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became a senior high student.
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Thank you so much for your great help.
Wish you all the best.
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Mr. Li,
I’m glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became a senior high student.
When I started senior English in the beginning, I found it much more difficult than ever before and I almost lost heart. Later, I gradually realized the importance of English, so I worked hard every day, such as reading and reciting as often as possible. I also asked my teachers and classmates for better ways of learning English. It is their help and your encouragement that help me improve my English. And now I’m getting more and more interested in it.
Thank you so much for your great help.
Wish you all the best.

試題分析：考查提綱類(lèi)作文，提綱類(lèi)作文的要點(diǎn)都在文章提示中給了出來(lái)。對(duì)考生的思維要求較低，只需要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯即可，使用合適的連接詞把這些要點(diǎn)連接起來(lái)，成為一個(gè)整體。要注意語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯方面的準(zhǔn)確性，賓語(yǔ)出現(xiàn)中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)，尤其要注意句子結(jié)構(gòu)。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：提綱類(lèi)短文關(guān)鍵是在于抓文章的要點(diǎn)，要把所有的要點(diǎn)都涵蓋。用合適的連接詞連接，注意語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和高級(jí)詞匯的運(yùn)用。