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2．假如你叫李華，六一兒童節(jié)就要到了，你所在的學(xué)校將要組織學(xué)生老師代表去慰問當(dāng)?shù)匾患夜聝涸海?nbsp;orphanage ）．請你給外教Tina 寫封信，邀請她參加．要點(diǎn)如下：
1．提出邀請；
2．活動的意義；
3．介紹活動的時(shí)間及幾項(xiàng)活動安排；
4．期待她的加入．
注意：1．字?jǐn)?shù) 120左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文流暢；3．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出．
Dear Tina，
I'd like to invite you tojoin us for a visit to a local orphanage next Sunday for Children's Day．Here are some details about the activity．
The reason why our school will organize such an activity is that we should show our concerns and love to children，especially these disabled children．（高分句型一）At the same time，giving is receiving．
We will leave school by bus at 9：00 a．m．a(chǎn)nd return at 4：00 p．m．We will donate books and toys to children．We will spend fun time together singing，dancing，and playing games，which may help them feel happy from the heart．（高分句型二）You are a popular and easy-going teacher in our school．Therefore，your presence will definitely cheer the children up．
Looking forward to your early reply．
Yours sincerely
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假如你叫李華，六一兒童節(jié)就要到了，你所在的學(xué)校將要組織學(xué)生老師代表去慰問當(dāng)?shù)匾患夜聝涸海?nbsp;orphanage ）．請你給外教Tina 寫封信，邀請她參加，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點(diǎn)包括：提出邀請；活動的意義；介紹活動的時(shí)間及幾項(xiàng)活動安排；期待她的加入．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：At the same time同時(shí)；Therefore因此；cheer the children up使孩子們振作起來；Look forward to盼望；
The reason why our school will organize such an activity is that we should show our concerns and love to children，especially these disabled children．（高分句型一）
We will spend fun time together singing，dancing，and playing games，which may help them feel happy from the heart．（高分句型二）

解答 Dear Tina，
       I'd like to invite you to join us for a visit to a local orphanage next Sunday for Children's Day．Here are some details about the activity．
       The reason why our school will organize such an activity is that we should show our concerns and love to children，especially these disabled children．（高分句型一）At the same time，giving is receiving．
       We will leave school by bus at 9：00 a．m．a(chǎn)nd return at 4：00 p．m．We will donate books and toys to children．We will spend fun time together singing，dancing，and playing games，which may help them feel happy from the heart．（高分句型二）You are a popular and easy-going teacher in our school．Therefore，your presence will definitely cheer the children up．
       Looking forward to your early reply．
                                                                                Yours sincerely
                                                                                    Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．