分析 本篇書面表達屬于讀寫任務類作文,根據(jù)提示信息針對"Is it better to participate in school activities for middle school students?"這一話題開展討論,大家發(fā)表了不同的看法,寫作時注意以下幾點:1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確幾個要點:分別從支持和反對兩個方面來討論該話題 2、要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語,按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫 3、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài);就本文而言應該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài).4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點.
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達:participate in參加;be beneficial to對…有益;,however然而;In my opinion以我的觀點來看;Finally最后; take the place of取代;
By going in for such activities,they can learn what they can't learn from books,which will be beneficial to them in the future.(高分句型一)
In my opinion,every student should engage in some after class activities because from these activities we can learn many valuable things that we won't learn in classrooms.(高分句型二)
Finally,after class activities broaden our circle of acquaintances.(高分句型三)
解答 Some students like to participate actively in after class activities.They think after class activities are an integral part of school life.By going in for such activities,they can learn what they can't learn from books,which will be beneficial to them in the future.(高分句型一)
Others,however,don't like after class activities at all.They think that a student's work at school is learning theoretical knowledge and nothing else.Taking part in after class activities is a waste of the valuable time at school.
In my opinion,every student should engage in some after class activities because from these activities we can learn many valuable things that we won't learn in classrooms.(高分句型二)School is not just a place for learning the difference between"lie"or"lay",or what caused the hours of the daily schedule.Finally,after class activities broaden our circle of acquaintances.(高分句型三)No amount of ordinary school work can take the place of friends acquired in the informal familiarities of activities.
點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題.它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力.在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致,時態(tài)呼應,用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓練:一是語言基礎方面的訓練,要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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