Question

英語課上，老師要求同桌同學相互修改作文。假設以下短文為你同桌所寫，請你對其進行修改。文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號(∧)，并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。3．必須按答題要求做題，否則不給分。

Jack London was a famous America writer. He was born in January 12th, 1876, in San Francisco. His family was very poor, so Jack had to leave for school to make money. He worked hard in much difficult jobs. Later Jack returned school, b ut he didn't stay. He wrote, “Life and pocket book were all too short.” In 1887, he went to Alaska to find out gold. He returned home and started to write. His writings were successfully, and he became rich and famous. Jack was no a happy man, however. In poor health, he took off her own life in 1926.

 

Answer 1

1.America改為American

2.in 改為on

3.leave for去掉for

4.much difficult 改為many

5.returned后面加to

6.all改為both

7.found out去掉out

8.successfully改為successful

9.no改為not

10.her 改為his

【解析】

1.America改為American 考查形容詞。句意：杰克倫敦是一個著名的美國作家。

2.in 改為on 考查介詞。句意：他出生在1876年一月12日，當指特定的某一天時用介詞on.

3.leave for去掉for 考查動詞短語。句意：因為家里很窮，所以他不得不輟學去掙錢。Leave school 輟學。

4.much difficult 改為many 考查形容詞。句意：在許多很艱難的工作上努力的工作。Many用來修飾可數名詞的復數形式。

5.returned后面加to 考查動詞。句意：后來他返回學校。Return to 返回某地。

6.all改為both 考查代詞。句意：他寫到生命像袖珍本一樣，都太短暫了。指的是兩者，故用both.

7.found out去掉out 考查動詞。句意：1887年他去阿拉斯加淘金。find out 則主要表示通過調查或觀察詢問等而查明情況或弄清事實真相等。find 主要指偶然發(fā)現或通過尋找而找到某人或某物等

8.successfully改為successful 考查形容詞。句意：他的寫作是十分成功的。形容詞做表語。

9.no改為not 考查否定詞。句意：杰克不是一個快樂的人。no 等于 not a 。

10.her 改為his 考查代詞。句意：因為健康問題，1926年過世。因為是he 故用his.

考點：短文改錯。