【題目】書面表達(dá)

假定你是李華。你將要參加本周六主題為An Unforgettable Experience in High School的英語演講比賽。你寫了一篇演講稿，請外教Jason給予指導(dǎo)。根據(jù)下面提示，給他寫一封郵件。

1.說明情況；

2.指導(dǎo)內(nèi)容（詞匯、語法、結(jié)構(gòu)等）；

3.回復(fù)時(shí)間；

4.表達(dá)感謝。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.信的格式已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Jason,

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Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】

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Dear Jason,

I’m Li Hua. I’m writing to ask you to do me a favor. It’s about an English speech contest with the title An Unforgettable Experience in High School, which I’m going to take part in this Saturday. I’ve finished my draft, but I find it still far from satisfactory.

I’m not sure of the usage of some words. There may also be some mistakes in grammar and sentence structures. Would you be so kind to spare some time to check them out and improve my article? If it’s convenient to you, please send it back by Thursday afternoon.

I’d appreciate it if you could give me your guidance. Looking forward to your reply. (113 words)

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)屬于說明文（應(yīng)用文），根據(jù)提示信息可知李華想?yún)⒓訉W(xué)校舉行的“高中的一次難忘的經(jīng)歷”的演講比賽，尋求外教Jason的幫助，希望他能夠給予指導(dǎo)。為此給Jason寫了一封郵件。寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點(diǎn)。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。 4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文主題鮮明，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)給文章填色不少。比如 It’s about an English speech contest with the title An Unforgettable Experience in High School, which I’m going to take part in this Saturday. Contest with此處是形容詞短語作定語，修飾先行詞 an English speech，且此句中又有which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，同樣修飾 an English speech；There may also be some mistakes in grammar and sentence structures. 此句是There be 句型的變體等。

文章還使用了大量短語 do sb a favor幫某人一個(gè)忙，take part in 參加，far from satisfactory并不滿意，be sure of 確信，spare time to do sth 抽出時(shí)間干某事等。固定句型 “If it’s convenient to you,如果你方便的話I’d appreciate it if …如果…我將不勝感激”等的使用使文章內(nèi)容更具有層次感，也使語言更加連貫。

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