Question

16．1．該刊的優(yōu)點：語言完美，內(nèi)容新鮮，圖文并茂；
2．你的建議：刊登名人故事，指導英語學習．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100 左右；開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
參考詞匯：刊登 carry
Dear Sir or Madam，
Congratulations on the tenth anniversary of English Readers!                                
I hope my suggestions will be taken into consideration．
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua

Answer 1

分析 本文是提綱類寫作，要點已給出．寫作時不要逐句翻譯，可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫同時要把所提示的點寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系．根據(jù)句意適當使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩．
【亮點說明】文章結(jié)構(gòu)嚴謹，語言簡練，高級詞匯、高級句式用在句中．I like the magazine because of the following reasons．復合介詞because of用在句中，恰到好處；the language in the magazine is perfect，which is good for English learners．非限制性定語從句巧妙運用；the magazine keeps up with times，so we can learn about what have happened around the world．so引導的并列句和what引導的介詞的賓語從句完美結(jié)合；it contains beautiful and vivid pictures，which makes reading it more interesting．再次使用非限制性定語從句；Would you please carry some inspiring stories about famous people in order to encourage readers？目的狀語體現(xiàn)在句中；It would also be greatly appreciated if…，固定句式堪稱經(jīng)典；另外，Congratulations，F(xiàn)irst，F(xiàn)inally，However，的運用為文章增色添彩．

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
       Congratulations on the tenth anniversary of English Readers!I'm a devoted reader of your magazine．I'm writing to express my opinions on your magazine．
        I like the magazine because of the following reasons．First，the language in the magazine is perfect，which is good for English learners．（高分句型一） Second，the magazine keeps up with times，so we can learn about what have happened around the world．Finally，it contains beautiful and vivid pictures，which makes reading it more interesting．（高分句型二）
       However，I still have some suggestions to make．Would you please carry some inspiring stories about famous people in order to encourage readers？It would also be greatly appreciated if you regularly offered some advice on English learning．（高分句型三）
       I hope my suggestions will be taken into consideration．
                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours faithfully，
                                                                                                                                                                                                   Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．