Question

7．假如你是中學(xué)生李明，你有留學(xué)美國一年的經(jīng)歷．近日你的好友李華來信說她即將留學(xué)美國一年，向你咨詢留學(xué)經(jīng)驗．請根據(jù)下列要點給她寫封回信，提出你的建議．
字?jǐn)?shù)：100詞左右．
要求：（1）多練習(xí)英語口語；
（2）上課時多參與課堂討論；
（3）與寄宿家庭關(guān)系融洽
（4）多參與社區(qū)志愿者活動．
Dear Li Hua，
I'm glad to hear that you are going to study in America for a year．To make your life in America a rewarding experience，I would like to share some useful tips with you．（高分句型一）
First of all，you need to practice your oral English so that you will have less trouble talking with the local people．（高分句型二）Secondly，you are encouraged to be active in class discussion so that you can develop your own idea on certain topics．Thirdly，when you stay with a host family，do your best to get along well with them by helping them with chores and so on．（高分句型三）More importantly，you can benefit greatly from your volunteering activities in your community．
I hope you will have a good time in America．
Yours，
LiMing．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息你有留學(xué)美國一年的經(jīng)歷．近日你的好友李華來信說她即將留學(xué)美國一年，向你咨詢留學(xué)經(jīng)驗．請根據(jù)下列要點給她寫封回信，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：：（1）多練習(xí)英語口語；（2）上課時多參與課堂討論；（3）與寄宿家庭關(guān)系融洽（4）多參與社區(qū)志愿者活動．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：First of all首先；have trouble （in） doing sth在做…方面有困難；Secondly其次；Thirdly第三；get along well with與…相處的好；More importantly更重要的是；benefit from從…中受益；have a good time過得愉快；
To make your life in America a rewarding experience，I would like to share some useful tips with you．（高分句型一）
First of all，you need to practice your oral English so that you will have less trouble talking with the local people．（高分句型二）
Thirdly，when you stay with a host family，do your best to get along well with them by helping them with chores and so on．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Li Hua，
       I'm glad to hear that you are going to study in America for a year．To make your life in America a rewarding experience，I would like to share some useful tips with you．（高分句型一）
       First of all，you need to practice your oral English so that you will have less trouble talking with the local people．（高分句型二）Secondly，you are encouraged to be active in class discussion so that you can develop your own idea on certain topics．Thirdly，when you stay with a host family，do your best to get along well with them by helping them with chores and so on．（高分句型三）More importantly，you can benefit greatly from your volunteering activities in your community．
       I hope you will have a good time in America．
                                                                                                                                                                                           Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                           Li Ming

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．