【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)(\)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

It was in a hot summer holiday which I visited Qingdao, port city in Shandong Province. My favourite sport is swimming, so I decide to go swimming in the sea one afternoon with my friend, Wang Fei and Li Lei.

It was the first time that I had swum in the sea , with waves come one after another to the shore and making great noises. Facing the rough sea, I felt a bit worrying and nearly gave up at first. And when I saw many people enjoying myself in the water, my fear was reducing. At last I joined in the swimmers. Now I still remember what wonderful swimming in the sea was.

【答案】第一處： which→that

第二處： port前面加不定冠詞a

第三處： decide→decided

第四處： friend→ friends

第五處： come →coming

第六處： worrying→worried

第七處： And→But

第八處： myself→themselves

第九處： 去掉in

第十處： what→how

【解析】

這是一篇記敘文。文章主要講了一個(gè)炎熱的夏天，我參觀青島，去海里游泳的美好經(jīng)歷。

第一處：考查強(qiáng)調(diào)句。句意：正是在一個(gè)炎熱的夏天，我參觀了青島，山東省的一個(gè)港口城市。把It was和which去掉，這個(gè)句子結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語(yǔ)義清晰，由此可知，這是一個(gè)強(qiáng)調(diào)句。強(qiáng)調(diào)句的基本結(jié)構(gòu)是：it is/ was + 被強(qiáng)調(diào)部分 + that + 句子的其他成分，所以which改成that。

第二處：考查冠詞。句意：正是在一個(gè)炎熱的夏天，我參觀了青島，山東省的一個(gè)港口城市。泛指“一個(gè)港口城市”，port的首字母發(fā)音是輔音，所以port前面加不定冠詞a。

第三處：考查時(shí)態(tài)。描述發(fā)生在過(guò)去的事情，用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，所以decide改成 decided。

第四處：考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。句意：我最喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)是游泳，所以有一天下午，我決定和我的朋友王飛和李雷去海里游泳。根據(jù)Wang Fei and Li Lei可知這里用名詞復(fù)數(shù)，所以friend改成 friends。

第五處：考查with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)�！袄嘶ā焙汀斑^(guò)來(lái)”之間是主動(dòng)關(guān)系，用with + n. + doing結(jié)構(gòu)，所以come 改成coming。

第六處：考查形容詞。句意：面對(duì)洶涌的大海，一開(kāi)始我有點(diǎn)擔(dān)心，差點(diǎn)放棄。v+ing修飾物，v+ed修飾人，這里描述“我”，所以worrying改成worried。

第七處：考查連詞。句意：但是，當(dāng)我看到許多人在水里玩得很開(kāi)心時(shí)，我的恐懼減輕了。文中表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，所以And改成But。

第八處：考查反身代詞。句意：但是，當(dāng)我看到許多人在水里玩得很開(kāi)心時(shí)，我的恐懼減輕了。文中表示“他們自己”，所以myself改成themselves。

第九處：考查動(dòng)詞。句意：最后，我加入了游泳者的隊(duì)伍。joinin意為“參加”，后面接的賓語(yǔ)一般是表示競(jìng)賽、娛樂(lè)、游戲等活動(dòng)的名詞，join意為“參加（某組織），加入（某處任職），參加到某個(gè)人群中去，從而成為其中一員，所以去掉in。

第十處：考查感嘆句。句意：現(xiàn)在，我仍然記得在海里游泳有多么美妙。how后面接形容詞，what后面接名詞，所以what改成how。

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