Question

6．假如你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Peter想選修中文作為外語(yǔ)，為此寫(xiě)信征詢(xún)你的意見(jiàn)．請(qǐng)按以下要求給Peter寫(xiě)封100詞左右的回信．
1、鼓勵(lì)他選修中文；
2、中文的魅力（兩點(diǎn)）；
3、學(xué)好中文的意義（兩點(diǎn)）．
注意：信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Peter，
Nice to receive your letter，in which you sought for my advice on whether you should choose Chinese as a second language．
        ．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類(lèi)作文，根據(jù)提示信息美國(guó)朋友Peter想選修中文作為外語(yǔ)，為此寫(xiě)信征詢(xún)你的意見(jiàn)．請(qǐng)按以下要求給Peter寫(xiě)封100詞左右的回信，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：鼓勵(lì)他選修中文；中文的魅力（兩點(diǎn)）；學(xué)好中文的意義（兩點(diǎn)）．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)．本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：seek for尋求；a wise choice明智的選擇；for one thing一方面；for another另一方面；What's more而且；do well in在…方面做得好；hesitate to do 猶豫的去做；
Nice to receive your letter，in which you sought for my advice on whether you should choose Chinese as a second language．（高分句型一）
For one thing，Chinese is certainly one of the oldest and most beautiful languages that are still being used in the world．（高分句型二）
For another，the handwriting of Chinese is quite special and unique，thus helping you create a new thinking way．（高分句型三）
Learning Chinese well，you can communicate with the largest population in the world，which helps you with more opportunities to make a career．（高分句型四）

解答 Dear Peter，
       Nice to receive your letter，in which you sought for my advice on whether you should choose Chinese as a second language．（高分句型一） I consider it as a wise choice．
       For one thing，Chinese is certainly one of the oldest and most beautiful languages that are still being used in the world．（高分句型二）For another，the handwriting of Chinese is quite special and unique，thus helping you create a new thinking way．（高分句型三）Learning Chinese well，you can communicate with the largest population in the world，which helps you with more opportunities to make a career．（高分句型四）What's more，the Chinese language is sure to give you a glimpse of the colourful culture of China．
       May you do well in learning Chinese．If you have any problems，don't hesitate to write to me．
       Best wishes，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．