【題目】魯?shù)?.3大地震發(fā)生之后，你的奧地利筆友Tom發(fā)來電子郵件，向你了解地震的有關(guān)情況。請你根據(jù)下列提示給Tom 回一封電子郵件。

地震發(fā)生的時間

2014-8-3

地震發(fā)生的地點

云南省魯?shù)榭h

地震震級

里氏6.5級；14年以來云南遭受的最強(qiáng)、殺傷力最大的地震

地震造成的破壞

1. 造成615人死亡；3143人受傷；114人失蹤。

2. 大量的房屋倒塌，數(shù)千人無家可歸。

3. 山體滑坡，道路被堵，供電、供水、通信中斷

各界反應(yīng)

政府立即采取行動組織官兵，志愿者前去救援.

［寫作內(nèi)容］

1．地震發(fā)生的時間、地點；

2．地震的影響；

3. 各界反應(yīng)。

生詞；里氏6.5級 measure at 6.5Ms

山體滑坡hill slide 通信telecommunication

［寫作要求］

只能用5個句子表達(dá)全部內(nèi)容。

［評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)］

句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章連貫。

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【答案】

One possible version:

A terrible earthquake, measuring at 6.5Ms, which is believed to be the strongest and deadliest one since 14 years ago in Yunnan, struck Ludian County, Yunnan Province on August 3. It caused 615 people deaths,3143 people injured, and 114 people missing. A great number of houses and buildings were destroyed, leaving thousands of people homeless. What’s worse, there were hill slide, with roads blocked as well as water supply, electricity and telecommunication cut off. Luckily, the government took immediate action to organize a great many soldiers and volunteers to rescue the people from danger.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是篇圖表材料作文, 要求學(xué)生筆友Tom回一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1．地震發(fā)生的時間、地點；2．地震的影響；3. 各界反應(yīng)。所以時態(tài)要以一般過去時為主。并且只能用5個句子表達(dá)全部內(nèi)容。還應(yīng)該注意使用較高級的詞匯和句子的銜接，以提高作文的檔次。

【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如since 14 years ago，A great number of，thousands of people homeless, a great many，還運(yùn)用了非限制性定語從句which is believed to be the strongest and deadliest one since 14 years ago in Yunnan, v-ing短語形式做伴隨狀語leaving thousands of people homeless.等等。并注意了句子變化和句子之間的銜接如：What’s worse, as well as，Luckily等。

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