Question

10．下面短文中有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，請(qǐng)?jiān)谟绣e(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（λ），并在其下面寫上該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
During the summer vacation this year，I thought I should do everything meaningful instead of stay at home，so I got a job at a KFC fast food restaurant and worked there like a cleaner．I worked eight hours a day for three week．The job was hard and bored，and it seemed endless，what made me so tired that I nearly gave it up halfway．And I stuck to it with great determination．Every day I start off for work early in the morning and got to home late in the evening．Finally I finished the job before the new term began．Now，I understand what labor means．I think it is really great experience．

Answer 1

分析 這段文字講述了作者暑假在KFC快餐店打工的一段經(jīng)歷，作者每天工作八小時(shí)，連續(xù)工作了三周，工作又累又無(wú)聊，以至于他都要放棄了，但他最終以強(qiáng)大的意志力堅(jiān)持了下來(lái)．這段經(jīng)歷使作者明白了勞動(dòng)的意義，他認(rèn)為這是一次很偉大的經(jīng)歷．

解答 During the summer vacation this year，I thought I should do everything meaningful instead of stay at home，so I got a job at a KFC
                                                                                         something                               staying
fast food restaurant and worked there like a cleaner．I worked eight hours a day for three week．The job was hard and bored，and it
                                                        as                                                                       weeks                                 boring
seemed endless，what made me so tired that I nearly gave it up halfway．And I stuck to it with great determination．Every day I start
                        which                                                                           But                                                                           started
off for work early in the morning and got to home late in the evening．Finally I finished the job before the new term began．Now，
                                                        去掉to
I understand what labor means．I think it is really∧great experience
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1．everying改為something；考查不定代詞，根據(jù)句意"我認(rèn)為我應(yīng)該做些有意義的事情"得知應(yīng)該用something，everything意為"每一件事"．
2．stay改為staying；考查介詞的用法，介詞后面要跟名詞或動(dòng)名詞．
3．like改為as；考查介詞，as在這里意為"作為"，句意為"我在KFC找到了一份清潔工的工作"．
4．week改為weeks；考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)，week是可數(shù)名詞，前面有three，所以要用復(fù)數(shù)．
5．bored改為boring；考查形容詞，這里句子主語(yǔ)為the job，所以用boring，說(shuō)明事物的性質(zhì)；過(guò)去分詞做形容詞通常修飾人，說(shuō)明人物的心理狀態(tài)．
6．what改為which；考查定語(yǔ)從句，這是一個(gè)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，用which引導(dǎo)，which在從句中作主語(yǔ)．
7．And改為But；考查連詞，根據(jù)上下文語(yǔ)境，這里應(yīng)為轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，所以用But．
8．start改為started；考查句子的時(shí)態(tài)，這里描述的是假期發(fā)生了的事情，所以要用過(guò)去時(shí)．
9．去掉to；考查介詞，這里home是副詞，前面不用加介詞．
10．really后面加a；考查冠詞，experience作為經(jīng)歷講是可數(shù)名詞，所以加a，表示泛指．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)首先快速閱讀短文，了解短文基本大意，確定文章的基本時(shí)態(tài)，再運(yùn)用語(yǔ)法，詞匯，習(xí)慣性短語(yǔ)等基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)進(jìn)一步分析各個(gè)句子，找出文中的錯(cuò)誤加以修改．