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高考越來(lái)越近了，很多高考生家長(zhǎng)都為孩子請(qǐng)來(lái)高考保姆（nurse），學(xué)校掛高考倒計(jì)時(shí)牌，每天上午、下午第一節(jié)課前，由老師帶領(lǐng)全班學(xué)生喊口號(hào)……對(duì)于家長(zhǎng)和學(xué)校的這些做法人們褒貶不一。
請(qǐng)根據(jù)以上說(shuō)明、寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)和寫(xiě)作要求，為�？�“英語(yǔ)角”版面寫(xiě)一篇短文。
寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1．贊成者觀點(diǎn)；
2．反對(duì)者觀點(diǎn)；
3．自己的觀點(diǎn)。
寫(xiě)作要求：
1．短文詞數(shù)不少于100；
2．開(kāi)頭部分已寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
3．可根據(jù)情況增減細(xì)節(jié)，詳略得當(dāng)；
4．不能使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。
參考詞匯：倒計(jì)時(shí)牌countdown board 口號(hào)slogan
With less than 60 days before the College Entrance Examinations, _________________
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Answer 1

Many parents hire nurses to take care of their children, some schools put up countdown boards in the classrooms and every day before the first class in the morning or afternoon teachers shout encouraging slogans together with their students
Some people are in favour of these measures, saying that they will keep up the students’ fighting spirits and help them achieve success in their final exams. Others think differently. They believe students can only perform their best when they are not stressful.
As a Senior 3 student, I understand why schools and parents behave the ways they do, but the more you hurry, the less process you are likely to make. Only by being happy and confident can we eventually work miracles.

試題分析：本文是一篇議論文。文章給出了簡(jiǎn)單的漢語(yǔ)提示，這要求考生成文時(shí)要充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力。將文章內(nèi)容自然的表達(dá)出來(lái)。成文時(shí)應(yīng)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1.采用三段成文法：（1）敘述現(xiàn)象；（2）文章的重點(diǎn)，正反雙方的觀點(diǎn)；（3）發(fā)表我的看法。2.時(shí)態(tài)：用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主；3.人稱：第三人稱；4.恰當(dāng)使用高級(jí)詞匯、短語(yǔ)和句型，提高文章的檔次；5.適當(dāng)使用一些連詞和插入語(yǔ)，使文章表達(dá)自然、流暢。
【范文亮點(diǎn)】使用了非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)：saying that they will keep up the students’ fighting spirits and help them achieve success in their final exams. 使用了倒裝句：Only by being happy and confident can we eventually work miracles.使用了從句：I understand why schools and parents behave the ways they do，They believe students can only perform their best when they are not stressful. 短語(yǔ)：be in favour of ；keep up