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10．假定你是李華，在獲悉Perfect English 英文報社將舉行國際中學(xué)生"中華傳統(tǒng)文化"（Chinese traditional culture）征文比曬活動后，你想寫信請你的美國朋友Peter參加．信的內(nèi)容包括：
1．主題：中華傳統(tǒng)文化知識；
2．活動時間：2017年7月1日-31日；
3．投稿郵箱：CTCcompetition@perfectenglish．com．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Peter，
The newspaper Perfect English is going to hold an International High School Student Competition，whose theme is Chinese traditional culture．（高分句型一）It will last from July 1st to July 31st．Any student who is interested is welcome to participate．（高分句型二）I know you are always interested in Chinese traditional culture，especially some festivals，like the Spring Festival and the Mid-autumn Festival．This is surely a good chance for you to deepen your understanding of them．If you want to join，you can send your article to CTCcompetition@perfectenglish．com．Also don't hesitate to contact me if you have any question．（高分句型三）
Best wishes．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假定你是李華，在獲悉Perfect English 英文報社將舉行國際中學(xué)生"中華傳統(tǒng)文化"（Chinese traditional culture）征文比曬活動后，你想寫信請你的美國朋友Peter參加．寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：主題：中華傳統(tǒng)文化知識；活動時間：2017年7月1日-31日；投稿郵箱：CTCcompetition@perfectenglish．com． 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：Chinese traditional culture中國傳統(tǒng)文化；be interested in對…感興趣；hesitate to 猶豫地去做；
The newspaper Perfect English is going to hold an International High School Student Competition，whose theme is Chinese traditional culture．（高分句型一）
Any student who is interested is welcome to participate．（高分句型二）
Also don't hesitate to contact me if you have any question．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Peter，
       The newspaper Perfect English is going to hold an International High School Student Competition，whose theme is Chinese traditional culture．（高分句型一）It will last from July 1st to July 31st．Any student who is interested is welcome to participate．（高分句型二）I know you are always interested in Chinese traditional culture，especially some festivals，like the Spring Festival and the Mid-autumn Festival．This is surely a good chance for you to deepen your understanding of them．If you want to join，you can send your article to CTCcompetition@perfectenglish．com．Also don't hesitate to contact me if you have any question．（高分句型三）
       Best wishes．
                                                                                                                                                                                                    Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                   Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．