Question

閱讀下面的短文(執(zhí)法的父親)，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。

　　Recently a program was shown on CCTV．An old man took his son to the police station to admit all the crime because of killing a neighbour’s son 15 years ago．This old man looked for his son for 15 years and finally found him in a strange place far away from his hometown．

　　What happened on earth?

　　The old man lived in Shanxi and he had a happy family, although they were poor．Two sons were good to him and his wife．But one day, an incident happened．The old man querrelled with the neighbour and was beaten by them．After his old son cam back, he told his son about it．After hearing that, his son rushed to the neighbour’s house and fought with them．Finally he took a knife and killed the neighbour’s son．Then he escaped quickly and secretly without telling the old man．Since that, the old man didn’t see his son any more．

　　After his son disappeared, the old man’s wife killed herself soon．His younger son went to the south for work．Only this old man was left at home．But he determined to find back his lost son．Day by day, he looked around everywhere．Year by year, he looked for his son from one province to another province．One day he came to He Nan province and suddenly he found his son in a village by chance．At that time, his son had got married and has a lovely son．However, the old man’s determination didn’t shake．He persuaded his son to go back to admit his crime in the police station and accept the punishment of the law again and again．Time and time again, the old man talked with his daughter-in-law．In the end, the old man’s words affected his son and his daughter-in-law．The next day, the old man took his son to the local police station in his hometown．His son was sentenced to prison for 10 years because of the neighbor’s son’s death．

　　The old man cried loudly, meanwhile he felt a big and heavy stone fell to the ground from his brains．

看完這篇報導(dǎo)后，全班同學(xué)無比激動，深深地為這位老父親的行為所感動，15年如一日，為了不饒恕兒子的犯罪行為，他四處奔波尋找兒子，最后終于讓兒子受到法律的懲罰。請你給這位老人寫一封信，談?wù)勀愕母惺�。信的開頭已經(jīng)寫出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

[寫作內(nèi)容]

1．以約30個詞總結(jié)老人的做法

2．以約120個詞發(fā)表自己的看法，并包括如下要點：

(1)你是否贊同老人的做法及對老人行為的理解

(2)老人的行為給社會帶來反響；

(3)被老人行為感動并祝福老人。

[寫作要求]

作文中可使用自己的真實打算或虛構(gòu)的打算，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

　　[評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]

　　句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。

Dear Sir,

　　Reading this report, I feel moved by your action

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Kind regards!

Yours,

Peter

Answer 1

答案：
解析：

Dear Poter, 　　It is very moving to read this report about you．You set a good example to all of us．As a girl, you give your love to those who need help in the poor area or in the disaster place．I should learn from you． 　　In this report, you not only do good deeds for the people in difficulty．When Lewis County flood happened, you donated food and clothes, even money to them．Even you drove very far by yourself to help them by yourself．Not only did you do that, but also you affected the people beside you and called on them to contribute love to the people in disaster．In your working unit, many people join you and giving donation．After this donation, you even decided to continue this kind of donation and you set up a website to donate．If some kind people want to donate, they can contact you．That’s a good action, which can solve many problems of the poor people and help them to rebuild their home again． 　　In a word, I admire you for your action and boldness．You are well worth learning from．I hope everybody willl give a hand to those who are in trouble or difficulty．Let people feel love around the world．Meanwhile I hope your career will become wider and wider． 　　Best regards! Yours, Peter．