Question

3．Suppose your class is having a discussion about what kind of friends you would like to have．Please write about your opinion（s） and give reasons．（假設(shè)你們班級(jí)正在進(jìn)行一場(chǎng)討論，主題是關(guān)于希望擁有什么樣的朋友，請(qǐng)談?wù)勀愕南敕ê屠碛桑?br />要求：
（1）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名；
（2）100詞左右．
Friends are important in our life．Everyone needs friends．
What kind of friends do I want to have？I think I'd like to have two different kinds of friends．Firstly I need friends who are quiet．I'm shy and quiet person．The thing I like to do is reading books quietly．I want my friends to be the same as me so that we can read together．Secondly，I expect my friends to be funny and humorous．I have much stress from school．So I hope my friend can make me laugh．
I wish that all of us can find friends．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇開放式作文，寫作時(shí)不僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文．需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題．
亮點(diǎn)句型一：Firstly I need friends who are quiet．首先我需要安靜的朋友．本句中who are quiet是一個(gè)定語從句，修飾名詞friends．
亮點(diǎn)句型二：I want my friends to be the same as me so that we can read together．我希望我的朋友和我一樣，以便我們可以一起閱讀． so that we can read together是一個(gè)目的狀語從句．

解答 Friends are important in our life．Everyone needs friends．
What kind of friends do I want to have？I think I'd like to have two different kinds of friends．Firstly I need friends who are quiet．（亮點(diǎn)句型一）I'm shy and quiet person．The thing I like to do is reading books quietly．I want my friends to be the same as me so that we can read together．（亮點(diǎn)句型二）Secondly，I expect my friends to be funny and humorous．I have much stress from school．So I hope my friend can make me laugh．
I wish that all of us can find friends．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查開放性作文寫作，開放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部分的文字提示．給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大．對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力．在完成開放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭．同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語來提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性．