Question

The College Entrance Examination is coming soon, many students in senior 3 think that time is limited, and they care little about their rest time. Some of them give up their noon break or even stay up too late.
注意：① 無(wú)需寫標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語(yǔ)提示語(yǔ)；
② 除詩(shī)歌外，文體不限；
③ 文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
④ 詞數(shù)為120左右

Answer 1

As a Senior Three student, time seems much limited. As a result, more and more students try to study from early morning, even during the time after lunch. In my opinion, to take a nap after lunch is definitely necessary. Otherwise we will feel tired both physically and mentally.
During the time after lunch, we do something to get rid of tiredness. What we need is to have a real rest, instead of getting more tired. So doing nothing tiring in that period is really good for us.
My time after lunch is always relaxing. Sometimes I will turn on TV to keep up with the latest news for ten minutes and then have a rest. Sometimes I will have a short chat with my parents or just take a nap at home or in the classroom. When it is time for classes in the afternoon, I will feel refreshed again.

試題分析：文章圍繞高考前如何減壓這一話題展開，是一篇開放性的作文。題材比較新穎，貼近考生的生活實(shí)際，對(duì)考生的要求也比較高，要考生自己組織語(yǔ)言，列出提綱，在寫作過(guò)程中注意適當(dāng)運(yùn)用模板句型，使用一些高級(jí)短語(yǔ)和詞匯，注意使用各種句式，如：強(qiáng)調(diào)句，被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，倒裝句等不同的句式，讓文章充滿變化，不要那么的死板。還要恰當(dāng)使用銜接過(guò)渡詞。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文章使用了一些好的詞組： As a result因此, In my opinion在我看來(lái)，get rid of消除，keep up with跟上，句式比較好的有：what連接的主語(yǔ)從句：What we need is to have a real rest, instead of getting more tired. 還有When it is time for classes in the afternoon, I will feel refreshed again.這句話用了It is time for sth.的句型。