Question

“中國(guó)夢(mèng)”已經(jīng)成為一個(gè)社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)話題，根據(jù)最近央視的社會(huì)調(diào)查，不同的人群有不同的夢(mèng)想。請(qǐng)結(jié)合表格提示，用英語寫一篇關(guān)于“中國(guó)夢(mèng)(China Dream)”的演講稿。

不同人群	夢(mèng)想
城市居民	交通…、環(huán)境…
大學(xué)生	就業(yè)…、食品…
農(nóng)民	教育…、醫(yī)療…
你的夢(mèng)想	（請(qǐng)考生根據(jù)自己的經(jīng)歷或感想，提出至少兩個(gè)夢(mèng)想）

 
注意:
1. 對(duì)所給提示逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯。
2. 詞數(shù)150 左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
3. 作文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
China Dream
“China Dream” has become a hot topic among Chinese people. According to a recent survey by CCTV, different groups of people have different dreams.

Answer 1

                          Chinese Dream
“Chinese Dream” has become a hot topic among Chinese people. According to a recent survey by CCTV, different groups of people have different dreams.
Urban residents dream of having easy access to modern transportation so that life will be easier and more convenient. Besides, they hope to enjoy a better living environment and more public facilities. What college students are mainly concerned about is employment. So their dream is to have well-paid jobs where they can bring their potentials into full play. Meanwhile, they hope the government will strengthen its supervision over food so that people can have more pollution-free and green food. When it comes to the farmers, they hope that they can enjoy good and affordable medical care and their children can receive a good education.
As far as I am concerned, my dream is to be enrolled by a good university and be a talent who can make contributions to my country. Besides, I dream there to be practical reforms in education so that high school students have enough time to sleep and exercise.

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【亮點(diǎn)說明】Urban residents dream of having easy access to modern transportation so that life will be easier and more convenient. 這句話用了so that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句， What college students are mainly concerned about is employment. 這句話是主語從句，So their dream is to have well-paid jobs where they can bring their potentials into full play. 這句話里面有不定式做表語，和地點(diǎn)狀語，When it comes to the farmers, they hope that they can enjoy good and affordable medical care and their children can receive a good education.這句話是When it comes to這個(gè)句型，my dream is to be enrolled by a good university and be a talent who can make contributions to my country. 這句話里面有定語從句，還有Besides, Meanwhile, As far as I am concerned,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更連貫。