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16．假定你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面內(nèi)容提示寫一則通知，告知學(xué)生們有關(guān)下周五上午9：00史密斯教授來(lái)校做演講的情況．

地點(diǎn)	學(xué)校餐廳
演講人	來(lái)自河北師大（Hebei Normal University）的史密斯教授
主題	多元的美國(guó)文化（The diversity of American culture）
要求	與本班班長(zhǎng)聯(lián)系，填寫個(gè)人信息表格，按時(shí)參加

注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右．文章的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
2．可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫．
Attention，fellow students．
There's something important I want to tell you．To have a better understanding of American culture，our school is going to hold a lecture．（高分句型一）Professor Smith from Hebei Normal University will make a wonderful speech on"The diversity of American culture"．Remember，the speech will be held in the dinning hall next Friday at nine o'clock in the morning．If you are interested，please first contact the monitor of your class，and then fill in a form about your basic personal information．（高分句型二）And finally，please get there on time and keep the hall clean．     Thank you！

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于圖表類作文，根據(jù)提示信息寫一則通知，告知學(xué)生們有關(guān)下周五上午9：00史密斯教授來(lái)校做演講的情況，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：地點(diǎn)，演講人，主題，要求等 2、圖表是文章的總體框架，要在圖表的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：To have a better understanding of為了更好地理解；make a wonderful speech 做一個(gè)精彩的演講；finally最后
To have a better understanding of American culture，our school is going to hold a lecture．（高分句型一）
If you are interested，please first contact the monitor of your class，and then fill in a form about your basic personal information．（高分句型二）

解答 Attention，fellow students．There's something important I want to tell you．To have a better understanding of American culture，our school is going to hold a lecture．（高分句型一）Professor Smith from Hebei Normal University will make a wonderful speech on"The diversity of American culture"．Remember，the speech will be held in the dinning hall next Friday at nine o'clock in the morning．If you are interested，please first contact the monitor of your class，and then fill in a form about your basic personal information．（高分句型二）And finally，please get there on time and keep the hall clean．
Thank you!

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．