Question

3．Directions：Write an English composition in 120-150words according to the instructions．
近期，你校網(wǎng)站發(fā)起一項(xiàng)活動(dòng)，投票選舉一項(xiàng)你校學(xué)生共同參與的主題活動(dòng)．給網(wǎng)站編輯寫(xiě)信，談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ�信中必須包括�?br />1．你希望參與的活動(dòng)．
2．你推薦該活動(dòng)的理由．
3．你對(duì)此項(xiàng)活動(dòng)的建議．
（文中不得出現(xiàn)考生姓名，學(xué)校等任何真實(shí)信息）
Dear editor，
I would like to recommend that we hold an English festival which all of us students can take part in．（希望參與的活動(dòng)）
As far as I am concerned，English festival will contribute us a lot．Firstly，holding English festival can enrich students'life．They can learn different customs and cultures of English-speaking countries．It will be more interesting and lively than we learn in class．Secondly，I think English festival will be a good platform for students to display their talents in English and thus give those students more interest and confidence in learning English．（推薦該活動(dòng)的理由）
I suggest that the English festival should include various activities．For example，we can have an English party in which students can give English songs，speeches and so on．We can also have an English debate辯論 about some interesting topics．All in all，I hope that the English Festival can help us students learn more about English culture and can make our after-class life more colorful and meaningful．（對(duì)此項(xiàng)活動(dòng)的建議）
Yours sincerely，．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文，讓我們寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于全校學(xué)生可共同參與的主題活動(dòng)，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語(yǔ)思維，將提供的信息用英語(yǔ)完整流暢的表達(dá)出來(lái)．寫(xiě)作需要用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般將來(lái)時(shí)，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：你希望參與的活動(dòng)，推薦該活動(dòng)的理由，對(duì)此項(xiàng)活動(dòng)的建議．首先總體介紹參與的活動(dòng)，然后介紹推薦該活動(dòng)的理由，最后建議．我們此篇作文分為三部分，第一部分為參與的活動(dòng)，第二部分為推薦該活動(dòng)的理由，第三部分為對(duì)此項(xiàng)活動(dòng)的建議
重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)與句型：
As far as I am concerned就我而言
All in all總的來(lái)說(shuō)
make our after-class life more colorful and meaningful．使得我們的課后生活更加多彩，有意義
take part in 參加
I would like to recommend that we （should ） hold an English festival  which all of us students can take part in此句注意recommend虛擬語(yǔ)氣shoule 可省略，及定語(yǔ)從句
holding English festival can enrich students'life動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞單數(shù)

解答 Dear editor，
 I would like to recommend that we hold an English festival which all of us students can take part in．（希望參與的活動(dòng)）
 As far as I am concerned，English festival will contribute us a lot．Firstly，holding English festival can enrich students'life．They can learn different customs and cultures of English-speaking countries．It will be more interesting and lively than we learn in class．Secondly，I think English festival will be a good platform for students to display their talents in English and thus give those students more interest and confidence in learning English．（推薦該活動(dòng)的理由）
 I suggest that the English festival should include various activities．For example，we can have an English party in which students can give English songs，speeches and so on．We can also have an English debate辯論 about some interesting topics．All in all，I hope that the English Festival can help us students learn more about English culture and can make our after-class life more colorful and meaningful．（對(duì)此項(xiàng)活動(dòng)的建議）
Yours sincerely，

點(diǎn)評(píng) 第一步：審題，確定體裁格式、主體時(shí)態(tài)、中心人稱和內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，避免填表式或履歷表式表達(dá)．
第二步：擬定提綱，創(chuàng)造良好的開(kāi)端；敘述得體，布局謀篇；巧妙過(guò)渡，完美結(jié)尾．
第三步：遣詞造句，上下銜接，地道表達(dá)，行文成篇（注意"參考詞匯"的提示作用）．