Question

14．最近，你們學(xué)校開展了以"中國夢"為主題的系列活動(dòng)．你參加了其中的英語演講比賽，請你寫一篇題為"My Chinese Dream"的演講稿．內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：
1．你對(duì)中國夢的暢想；
2．你能為實(shí)現(xiàn)中國夢做出哪些努力．
注意：
1．總詞數(shù)不少于100；
2．開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Good morning，everyone!
The topic of my speech today is"My Chinese Dream"．
                                                                           
Thank you for listening!

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇演講稿，介紹自己的夢想以及如何實(shí)現(xiàn)它．結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，一般過去時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)，人稱為單數(shù)第一、第三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用．
重點(diǎn)短語和句型：
see doctors 看醫(yī)生
cheer sb up 鼓勵(lì)某人，讓某人開心起來
with the help of sb 在某人的幫助下
come true 實(shí)現(xiàn)
When I was in Grade Seven，I was sick and often went to see doctors．
句中when連接時(shí)間狀語從句．
In order to achieve my dream，I will study hard．
句中in order to表示目的，在句中作目的狀語．
I think my dream will come true one day．
句中think后接賓語從句，省略了連詞that．

解答 My Chinese Dream
    Good morning，everyone！
    The topic of my speech today is"My Chinese Dream"．【點(diǎn)明主題】
    Everyone has his dream．My dream is to be a doctor．When I was in Grade Seven，I was sick and often went to see doctors．（高分句型一） The doctors were very friendly to me and they often cheered me up．With the help of them，I was getting better．Now I'm very healthy．Since then I have hoped to become a doctor．In order to achieve my dream，I will study hard．（高分句型二） I'll give my love to the patients as much as possible and help them out of danger．【講述夢想】
    To be a doctor is really great．I think my dream will come true one day．（高分句型三）【表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)】
    Thank you for listening！

點(diǎn)評(píng) 書面表達(dá)題考查的是英語的應(yīng)用能力．寫作時(shí)要注意：要點(diǎn)的提煉要全；關(guān)鍵短語和句型要寫對(duì)；過渡詞和過渡短語要自然，通順地道；最后還要注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)使用要正確．