Question

11．假設你校學生會定于 4 月 10 日組織一次高三學生的登山活動，請根據(jù)以下提示，以學生會的名義用英語寫一則通知，歡迎同學們積極參加．
1．活動目的；
2．集合時間；
3．活動內(nèi)容及注意事項．
注意：1．詞數(shù) 100 左右；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文流暢；
3．通知的格式已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Notice
In order to encourage Senior Three students to take exercise and relax themselves，we're going to organize a mountain-climbing activity on April 10．（高分句型一）We're to gather at the school gate and start at 7：20 a．m．by bus and get back at 7：00 p．m． We'll climb Mangshan Mountain in the morning，on the top of which we'll have a picnic at noon．（高分句型二）In the afternoon we'll be divided into groups and have a free time． Remember to take photos and make notes for the photo exhibition or the essay contest to be held later at our school．Besides，take your lunch and drinking water with you．If you want to join，please come to Student Union and sign up before April 5．
Student Union
March 30．

Answer 1

分析 本次作文要求學生會定于4月10日組織一次高三學生的登山活動，以學生會的名義用英語寫一則通知，歡迎同學們積極參加．要點包括：目的；地點；內(nèi)容與要求；溫馨提示；寫作亮點：本篇條理清楚，要點全面，結構連貫．其句式上的變化既使得文章生動而流暢，也體現(xiàn)了作者駕馭句式的能力．例如：定語從句on the top of which we'll have a picnic at noon．被動語態(tài)we'll be divided into groups．不定式的被動to be held．In order to，make notes，essay contest等詞匯及Besides 等連接詞．高分句型：
（一）We're togather at the school gate and start at 7：20 a．m．by bus and get back at 7：00 p．m 用be to do 來表示將來，強調(diào)務必要準時集合．
（二）We'll climb Mangshan Mountain in the morning，on the top of whichwe'll have a picnic at noon．這個句子用介詞短語加關系詞來引導非限制性定語從句，即on the  top of+which，意思是在山頂上．
（三）Remember to take photos and make notes for the photo exhibition or the essay contest to be heldlater at our school．此處用動詞不定式的被動形式來做定語表示將來，非謂語動詞運用恰到好處．

解答 Notice
      In order to encourage Senior Three students to take exercise and relax themselves，we're going to organize a mountain-climbing activity on April 10．（高分句型一）We're to gather at the school gate and start at 7：20 a．m．by bus and get back at 7：00 p．m． We'll climb Mangshan Mountain in the morning，on the top of which we'll have a picnic at noon．（高分句型二）In the afternoon we'll be divided into groups and have a free time． Remember to take photos and make notes for the photo exhibition or the essay contest to be held later at our school．Besides，take your lunch and drinking water with you．If you want to join，please come to Student Union and sign up before April 5．
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Student Union
                                                                                                                                                                                                           March 30

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．