Question

11．此題要求改正所給短文中的錯(cuò)誤．對(duì)標(biāo)題號(hào)的每一行做出判斷：如無錯(cuò)誤，在該行右邊的橫線上劃（√）；如有錯(cuò)誤（每行只有一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤），則按下列情況改正：
此行多一個(gè)詞：把多余的詞用斜線劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉．
此行缺一個(gè)詞：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（^），在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞．
此行錯(cuò)一個(gè)詞：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞．
注意：原行沒有錯(cuò)的不要改．
In recent years，online shopping has become a new trend
between young consumers．Online shopping is fast and convenient.76．a(chǎn)mong 
The online shops sell a wide range of producats at a relative low price.77．relatively 
But on the other hand，it has some disadvantages.78．√ 
First，while shop，we cannot check the goods in person，79．shopping 
so the quality of the goods is guaranteed．Second，80．is后面加not 
when you pay through the online banks，some hackers may steal                    81．we 
our persoual informations，which will cause serious financial loss.82．information
Third，some advtisements on the Internet is unreliable，83．a(chǎn)re
which will lead to the castomers to be easily cheated.84．去掉第一個(gè)to 
In my opinion，we must think twice after we decide                                           85．before
to purchases goods on sale on the Internet．

Answer 1

分析 本段文字講到最近幾年網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物在年輕人當(dāng)中成為一種新趨勢(shì)．不可否認(rèn)網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物快捷方便，價(jià)格低廉，但它同時(shí)也存在弊端．首先網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物是我們不能親自當(dāng)面驗(yàn)貨，商品質(zhì)量很難保證；其次通過網(wǎng)上銀行支付時(shí)我們的個(gè)人信息有可能被竊取，導(dǎo)致經(jīng)濟(jì)損失；另外網(wǎng)絡(luò)上的有些廣告不可靠，消費(fèi)者很容易受騙．所以作者認(rèn)為，網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物之前一定要多加考慮．

解答 In recent years，online shopping has become a new trend
between young consumers．Online shopping is fast and convenient.76．between改為among
The online shops sell a wide range of producats at a relative low price.77．relative改為relatively
But on the other hand，it has some disadvantages.78．√
First，while shop，we cannot check the goods in person，79．shop改為shopping
so the quality of the goods is∧guaranteed．Second，80．is后面加not
when you pay through the online banks，some hackers may steal   81．you改為we
our persoual informations，which will cause serious financial loss.82．informations改為information
Third，some advtisements on the Internet isunreliable，83．is改為are
which will lead to the castomers to be easily cheated.84．去掉第一個(gè)to
In my opinion，we must think twice afterwe decide          85．a(chǎn)fter改為before
to purchases goods on sale on the Internet．
 
76．between改為among；考查介詞，among指在三者或三者以上的同類事物之間，among between 多指兩者之間，句子中young consumers應(yīng)指很多人，所以用among．
 77．relative改為relatively；考查副詞，這里需要修飾的是形容詞low，所以要用副詞形式relatively．
 78．√
 79．shop改為shopping；考查while的用法，這是一個(gè)省略句，省略了從句主語和be動(dòng)詞 英語中有規(guī)則，從句主語和主句主語一致時(shí)，可以省略從句中的主語和be動(dòng)詞，完整的
       句子應(yīng)為while we are shopping，we can not…這里省略了we are，即while shopping．
 80．is后面加not；考查句意，根據(jù)上下文這里句意應(yīng)是否定的，"商品質(zhì)量很難保證"，所以is后面加not．
 81．you改為we；考查人稱代詞，
 82．informations改為information；考查名詞，information作為"消息，信息"講是不可數(shù)名詞，所以不能加s．
 83．is改為are；考查主謂一致，句子的主語some advtisements 是復(fù)數(shù)形式，所以謂語動(dòng)詞用復(fù)數(shù)．
 84．去掉第一個(gè)to；考查to的用法，lead to中to是介詞，lead sb to do中to為不定式，意思是"引導(dǎo)/誘使某人干某事"．
 85．a(chǎn)fter改為before；考查介詞，根據(jù)上下文意思，這句應(yīng)該為"決定在網(wǎng)上買東西之前要多加考慮"，所以應(yīng)該用before．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)時(shí)要先整體把握文章的中心思想，確定文章的基本時(shí)態(tài)和語態(tài)，再?gòu)募?xì)節(jié)上分析句子成分，運(yùn)用所掌握的句型，短語，語法等基本語言知識(shí)找出文章中的錯(cuò)誤并加以修改．