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2．最近谷歌的AlphaGo打敗了韓國籍世界圍棋冠軍李世石，這個消息引起了人們的廣泛關(guān)注．人工智能AI（Artificial Intelligence）再次成為了人們熱議的話題．結(jié)合實際，談?wù)劊?br />1．人們可能對AI產(chǎn)生的不同看法及原因．
2．你的看法和原因．
注意
1．開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)
2．字?jǐn)?shù)：要求 100-120個詞
Recently，Google's AphaGo defeated Lee Sedol，the World Go Champion．                

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息最近谷歌的AlphaGo打敗了韓國籍世界圍棋冠軍李世石，這個消息引起了人們的廣泛關(guān)注．人工智能AI（Artificial Intelligence）再次成為了人們熱議的話題，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：人們可能對AI產(chǎn)生的不同看法及原因；你的看法和原因． 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：draw  people's attention吸引了人們的注意力；hold the belief持有信念；out of control失去控制；In my opinion以我的觀點來看；make good use of 充分利用；
 Some welcome the exciting progress and hold the belief that AI will surely benefit mankind in more fields for its intelligence will reach a level that no human being can ever achieve while some others fear that AI will eventually get out of control or even destroy mankind in the future for it will become something far superior than humans．（高分句型一）
In my opinion，AI，like any technological progress made by humans in the past，is neither good nor evil．（高分句型二）
What we should do is try to hold an objective attitude towards its development and make good use of it．（高分句型三）

解答 Recently，Google's AphaGo defeated Lee Sedol，the World Go Champion．The news has drawn many people's attention and made AI a heated topic．People's opinions towards AI are divided．
       Some welcome the exciting progress and hold the belief that AI will surely benefit mankind in more fields for its intelligence will reach a level that no human being can ever achieve while some others fear that AI will eventually get out of control or even destroy mankind in the future for it will become something far superior than humans．（高分句型一）
       In my opinion，AI，like any technological progress made by humans in the past，is neither good nor evil．（高分句型二）What we should do is try to hold an objective attitude towards its development and make good use of it．（高分句型三）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．