Question

20．假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文．文中有
10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞．
     2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
Recently campus safety has become public concern since a series of violent attacks happened，which causes serious damage．It makes us aware of the fact that safety should always come firstly in our daily life．
In this case，we should take effective measure which can solve this problem．Firstly，our students should realize we must follow our school or traffic rules，and pay attention to food safety，because many incidents happen just because of we are too careless．Secondly，you should take training of security so that we can keep calm if faced with conflicts．Thirdly，our government and schools should provide surroundings that our students can be buried in studying．
As far as I am concerned，improving campus safety is very important that we all should try our best to make anyone on campus safe and sound．

Answer 1

分析 短文主要講了如何采取措施來(lái)保證校園安全．

解答 Recently campus safety has become∧public concern since a series of violent attacks happened，which causes serious damage．It makes us aware of the fact that safety should
                                                    a                                                                                                  caused
always come firstly in our daily life．
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In this case，we should take effective measure which can solve this problem．Firstly，our students should realize we must follow our school or traffic rules，and pay attention
                                                        measures                                                                                                                                         and
to food safety，because many incidents happen just because of we are too careless．Secondly，you should take training of security so that we can keep calm if faced with
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conflicts．Thirdly，our government and schools should provide surroundings that our students can be buried in studying．
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As far as I am concerned，improving campus safety is very important that we all should try our best to make anyone on campus safe and sound．
                                                                                 so                                                                            everyone
1．在become和public之間加a，考查冠詞，concern作為名詞，是可數(shù)名詞，表示泛指前應(yīng)使用不定冠詞a．
2．causes改成caused，考查時(shí)態(tài)，表示過(guò)去發(fā)生的動(dòng)作，應(yīng)使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)．
3．firstly改成first，考查副詞，first本身就是副詞，修飾動(dòng)詞come．
4．measure改成measures，考查名詞，measure"措施"是可數(shù)名詞，此處應(yīng)使用復(fù)數(shù)形式．
5．or改成and，考查連詞，此處應(yīng)是并列的關(guān)系，而不是選擇，因此or改為and．
6．去掉of，考查連詞，此處because后接的是從句，因此of去掉．
7．you改成we，考查代詞，短文使用的是第一人稱復(fù)數(shù)we，因此代詞改為we．
8．that改成where，考查定語(yǔ)從句，句子先行詞是surroundings，在從句中充當(dāng)?shù)攸c(diǎn)狀語(yǔ)，因此使用where引導(dǎo)．
9．very改成so，考查固定句型，so…that…"如此…以致于…"．
10．a(chǎn)nyone改成everyone，考查代詞，根據(jù)語(yǔ)境應(yīng)是"每一個(gè)人"使用everyone．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是高考的必考題型之一．在平時(shí)學(xué)習(xí)過(guò)程中，一定要注意基礎(chǔ)方面．做此類題，一般分為幾步：第一瀏覽全文，知道文章大意及主體時(shí)態(tài)；第二逐句理解，逐句改正．一般采取從粗到細(xì)的原則，如句意通順的情況下，看句式結(jié)構(gòu)、固定短語(yǔ)有有沒(méi)有用錯(cuò)．具體到單詞，我們常講名詞注意單復(fù)數(shù)，動(dòng)詞注意謂語(yǔ)、非謂語(yǔ)，形容詞注意副詞及比較級(jí)，從句注意連接詞等．最后不要忘記重新過(guò)一遍文章，是否不當(dāng)之處．