【題目】短文改錯（共10小題，每題1分，滿分10分）

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文,文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句最多有兩處.錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加,刪除和修改.

增加:把缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),并在其下面寫出該詞.

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉.

修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞.

注意:1.每處錯誤極其修改均限一詞.

2.只允許修改10處,多者從第11處不記分.

Dear Jin Jing,

Your problem is common one among middle school students．Maybe the following advices can help you．First in all, believe in yourself．Your greatest problem is that you lack self-confidence．The first thing you must do it is to smile at your classmates．One smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any words．Your smile will show that you are friendly to him．Next, trying talking with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same interest with you．You can discuss your studies with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbies．Unless anyone is in trouble, you should be ready to help him or her．Once you have confidence, you can make as many friends as possibly．

Yours,

【答案】

【小題1】在is后加a

【小題2】advices→advice

【小題3】in→of

【小題4】去掉do后面的it

【小題5】loud→louder

【小題6】him→them

【小題7】trying→try

【小題8】share→shares

【小題9】unless→if

【小題10】possibly→possible

【解析】

試題解析：本文是一篇應用文，介紹了如何應對大多中學生在交往中都會遇到的困難。首先，你必須要相信自己，然后要做的第一件事情就是學會對同學們微笑。因為如果你想交朋友，一個微笑比任何語言都有用。然后你就要鼓起勇氣和那些與你一樣或者也對你感興趣的人說話，在別人有困難的時候，做好轉北區(qū)幫助他們。一旦你有了自信，那你就會交到很多好朋友。

【小題1】在is后加a考查不定冠詞。根據(jù)句意可知你的問題是中學生普遍都會遇到的一個問題，后面的one代指前面的problem，缺少冠詞，又因為是一個問題，故加a。

【小題2】advices→advice考查名詞。根據(jù)對全文的理解可知在下文中提到的建議可以幫助你。但是advice作為建議時用作不可數(shù)名詞，所以不應該加s。

【小題3】in→of考查固定搭配。根據(jù)句意可知首先，你要相信你自己。句中的首先應該為first of all，因為first of all 是固定搭配，并無first in all的搭配。

【小題4】去掉do后面的it考查插入語。根據(jù)句意可知你要做的第一件事就是對你的同學微笑。此句中的you must do是句子中的插入語，可以省略，所以原句就應該為The first you must do is smile at your classmates。插入語部分結構完整，所以it是多余的。

【小題5】loud→louder考察比較級。根據(jù)句意可知想做朋友的話，一個微笑勝過任何言語；此句中后面有than，說明句子是比較結構，故應將loud改為其比較級louder。

【小題6】him→them考查人稱代詞。根據(jù)句意可知你的微笑會讓別人感覺到你的友好。前文中提到你可以對你的＝同學們微笑，classmates用的是復數(shù)，所以這里人稱代詞應該用them。

【小題7】trying→try考查祈使句。根據(jù)句意可知試著與和你一樣害羞的或者也對你很感興趣的人進行交談。此句中應該用祈使句表示建議，而非謂語動詞不表達建議，所以應該用try原型。

【小題8】share→shares考察動詞。根據(jù)句意可知對你也同樣感興趣的人，此句中who指代對你感興趣的一個人，所以動詞應該用第三人稱單數(shù)形式，即要在動詞后面加s。

【小題9】unless→if考查條件狀語從句。根據(jù)句意可知如果有人有困難了要做好隨時幫助他們的準備。此句是一個條件狀語從句，而連詞unless表達除非的意思，相當于if not，不能引導虛擬條件狀語從句，通常引導虛擬條件狀語的連詞是if，所以應將unless換成if。

【小題10】possibly→possible考查固定搭配。根據(jù)句意可知你可以經(jīng)盡可能多的交朋友；as much as possible是固定搭配，不能用副詞。

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