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3．近年來(lái)，微信（Wechat）成為了人們非常喜歡的通信工具，但是也給人們帶來(lái)一些困擾．請(qǐng)對(duì)這一現(xiàn)象談一下自己的看法，內(nèi)容包括1．使用微信的利與弊；
2．自己的看法和建議．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．為使行文連貫可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)．
In recent years，Wechat is becoming increasingly popular．There are many reasons for Wechat to be known．To begin with，Wechat is a relatively cheap way of communication，which cuts down the cost of making a phone call．（高分句型一）Next，Wechat is to the taste of the majority of people，especiallythe youth，with its various functions．Furthermore，it is available everywhere at any time．
However，every coin has two sides．Firstly，our identity can be revealed and we can be in trouble．Moreover，spending too muchtime on your screen will do great harm to your health．（高分句型二）Finally，our attention might be drawntoo much to focus on study．
There is no doubt that Wechat will improve as time goes by．（高分句型三）．

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分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息近年來(lái)，微信（Wechat）成為了人們非常喜歡的通信工具，但是也給人們帶來(lái)一些困擾．請(qǐng)對(duì)這一現(xiàn)象談一下自己的看法，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點(diǎn)包括：使用微信的利與弊；自己的看法和建議．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：In recent years近年來(lái)；To begin with首先；cut down 減少；Furthermore而且；However然而；Firstly首先；Moreover而且；do great harm to對(duì)…有害；Finally最后；focus on專注于；
To begin with，Wechat is a relatively cheap way of communication，which cuts down the cost of making a phone call．（高分句型一）
Moreover，spending too much time on your screen will do great harm to your health．（高分句型二）
There is no doubt that Wechat will improve as time goes by．（高分句型三）

解答 In recent years，Wechat is becoming increasingly popular．There are many reasons for Wechat to be known．To begin with，Wechat is a relatively cheap way of communication，which cuts down the cost of making a phone call．（高分句型一）Next，Wechat is to the taste of the majority of people，especially the youth，with its various functions．Furthermore，it is available everywhere at any time．
      However，every coin has two sides．Firstly，our identity can be revealed and we can be in trouble．Moreover，spending too much time on your screen will do great harm to your health．（高分句型二）Finally，our attention might be drawn too much to focus on study．
      There is no doubt that Wechat will improve as time goes by．（高分句型三）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．