Question

【題目】書面表達

張紅從廣告上得知某公司需要一名秘書，于是她寫信應聘。以下是張紅的簡歷：

年齡：20歲，即將從職業(yè)學校畢業(yè)。

專業(yè): 企業(yè)管理（business management）

經歷：（1）學英語8年，會計算機；

（2）在過去三年中一直是本校學生報編輯之一，學習成績在班上優(yōu)秀;

（3）本人喜歡辦公室工作，相信能勝任秘書工作。

請你以張紅的名義向公司寫信應聘。

參考詞匯：職業(yè)學校 vocational school

專業(yè) major

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫的

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir,

Through the ad, I know you need a secretary. I would like to have this job. Now let me introduce myself to you. My name is Zhang Hong. I am twenty and will soon graduate from a vocational school. My major is business management. I have been learning English for 8 years and I have computer experience. I have been one of the editors for the student newspaper in our school for the past three years. My grades remain upper level in my class. The most important thing is that I like office work very much. I am sure I can do it well. I will appreciate it very much if you would give me the opportunity. Thank you for your consideration. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely yours,

Zhang Hong

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達為應用文，內容為求職信。寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫。3、根據(jù)要表達的內容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。 4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點。

【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結構。比如I will appreciate it very much if you would give me the opportunity使用了條件狀語從句。此外，文章還使用了大量短語would like to, introduce…to…等短語，是文章更流暢。