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3．假設(shè)你是李萍，你的筆友王強(qiáng)最近沉迷于電腦游戲不能自拔，嚴(yán)重影響了學(xué)習(xí)和身心健康．請你給他寫一封書信勸說他戒掉這一不良習(xí)慣，并對他的學(xué)習(xí)生活給出自己的建議．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100詞左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．

Answer 1

分析 本題考查觀點、建議及勸告等的英語表達(dá)．根據(jù)題目要求，形式上來看是屬于書信，體裁上屬于議論文．文章首先應(yīng)該明確自己對于沉迷電腦游戲的態(tài)度，其次要列舉沉迷電腦游戲的危害，最后勸說王強(qiáng)改掉不良習(xí)慣，并給出自己的建議．需要指出的是，要注意"沉迷于"玩電腦游戲和一般的玩電腦游戲之間的區(qū)別，否則會使文章失去說服力．
【相關(guān)語法點提示】電腦游戲 computer games；沉迷于 be addicted to，be indulged in；濫用 abuse；有害 be harmful to，do harm to；有益 be beneficial，be beneficial for sb．to do sth．；在很多方面 in many ways；擺脫 get rid of，break away from，keep away from；過有意義的生活 live a meaningful life；鍛煉 take exercise，do exercise
強(qiáng)身 build sb．up；參加活動 participate in activities；開闊視野 broaden one's hrizons
Although it's generally believed that computer games are interesting and can inspire our imagination，yet if you abuse them，they will be harmful toyou in many ways．（高分句型一）
 To begin with，they will waste too much valuable time which should be spent on your study or other beneficial things．（高分句型二）
Worse still，some games are full of violence，which will be harmful  to your mental health．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Wang Qiang，
        I felt very worried when I heard that you are addicted to computer games．Although it's generally believed that computer games are interesting and can inspire our imagination，yet if you abuse them，they will be harmful toyou in many ways．（高分句型一）
       To begin with，they will waste too much valuable time which should be spent on your study or other beneficial things．（高分句型二）In addition，playing games for a long time will do harm to your health，especially to your eyes．Worse still，some games are full of violence，which will be harmful  to your mental health．（高分句型三）
      Therefore，I strongly hope that you can break away from them．The earlier，the better．In order to live a meaningful life，you can read more good books，take more exercise to build you up or participate in some social activities to expand your horizons．
        Looking forward to your good news．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      Li Ping

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．