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19．假如你是李明，你發(fā)現(xiàn)部分同學(xué)每次遇到重要考試，都會(huì)出現(xiàn)一些焦慮癥狀．請(qǐng)你用英語寫一封信，向某學(xué)生英文報(bào)編輯反映該問題．信的內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括下列要點(diǎn)：
焦慮癥狀：頭暈、乏力、睡眠不好、食欲不振等   
 建 議：
 1．考前制定好合適的復(fù)習(xí)計(jì)劃 
  2．考試期間正常作息 
  3．睡前洗熱水澡、喝熱牛奶等有助于睡眠 
  其他建議（內(nèi)容由考生自己擬定） 
    注意：1．根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容寫一篇短文，不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫．   2．要準(zhǔn)確使用語法和詞匯；使用一定的句型、詞匯，清楚、連貫地表達(dá)自己的意思；   3．詞數(shù)：100個(gè)左右．開頭已給出，不計(jì)詞數(shù)．   參考詞匯：頭暈-dizzy（adj．） 
Dear editor，I'm Li Ming of Senior One，Guanghua Middle School．I'm writing to tell you about some symptoms 
of anxiety among us students before exams．_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

                                                     Yours sincerely，
                                                        Li Ming．

Answer 1

分析 本題是提綱類作文寫作，文章題材和體裁已經(jīng)給出，無需考生過多考慮．而考生重點(diǎn)要注意審題，只有做好了審題環(huán)節(jié)才能保證寫作的有效性和目的性．審題主要要做到以下幾點(diǎn)：一審題時(shí)要仔細(xì)看寫作要求不可漏掉要點(diǎn)．二．根據(jù)提綱要求本文可以用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．
亮點(diǎn)句型一：Most of us feel nervous when taking an important exam．我們大多數(shù)人在參加一次重要的考試時(shí)感到緊張．本句是一個(gè)省略句，when taking an important exam句中省略了主語most of us are，在英語中當(dāng)主句的主語和從句的主語是一個(gè)主語，從句中的謂語有be動(dòng)詞，主語和be動(dòng)詞可以省略．
亮點(diǎn)句型二：In my opinion，first of all，it's important to have a positive attitude towards exams，as they are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our study．在我看來，首先，重要的是有一個(gè)積極的態(tài)度對(duì)考試，因?yàn)樗麄冎皇且环N手段，檢查我們?nèi)绾闻c我們的學(xué)習(xí)．本句中it是一個(gè)形式主語，真正的主語是動(dòng)詞不定式to have a positive attitude towards exams；as在這個(gè)句中中引導(dǎo)的是一個(gè)原因狀語從句．

解答 Dear editor，
     I'm Li Ming，a student of Senior Three．I'm writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams．
     Most of us feel nervous when taking an important exam．Some feel dizzy or tired，some lose their appetites and the others even suffer from sleep problems，of which all have terrible effects on our exams．【闡述現(xiàn)象】
     Then how to get rid of these bad symptoms？In my opinion，first of all，it's important to have a positive attitude towards exams，as they are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our study．（亮點(diǎn)句型一） So there is no need to worry too much about the exam results．Study hard every day and make careful plans；and then we will reduce the pressure of exams．Besides，enough sleep can make us energetic and enable us to perform well in an exam．Therefore，we shouldn't stay up too late before the exams．Having a hot bath or a cup of milk before going to bed can contribute to a sound sleep．【提供建議】
                                                                                                                                                                                              Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                               Li Ming．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．