Question

如今網(wǎng)絡(luò)已經(jīng)對(duì)人們產(chǎn)生了很大影響，對(duì)中學(xué)生影響尤其之深。有人認(rèn)為網(wǎng)絡(luò)的利大于弊，有人認(rèn)為網(wǎng)絡(luò)的弊大于利。請(qǐng)以“Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇文章，結(jié)合實(shí)際情況談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/p>

Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet

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Answer 1

Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet

There is no doubt that we have benefited a lot from the Internet in our everyday life We can read news, watch films, keep in touch with our relatives, make friends, or play games to get relaxed on the Internet.

But every coin has two sides. The Internet also has bad effects on people, especially on teenagers. Things such as violence and cheating, often appear on the Internet seriously polluting their hearts and soul. Consequently, children will gradually lose interest in their studies.

Now,it's high time the government took effective measures. Some websites that disobey the rules should be made public and closed up. As students, we should protect ourselves by keeping on guard against the bad effects of the Internet. I'm sure we will have a better online environment soon so that the Internet can serve us better

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)是學(xué)生們非常熟悉的話題，對(duì)此學(xué)生都有親身體會(huì)和感受，所以不會(huì)無(wú)話可說(shuō)。但是在表達(dá)時(shí)要注意文章的三個(gè)要點(diǎn)，即網(wǎng)絡(luò)的益處、壞處和自己的觀點(diǎn)看法，對(duì)這些要點(diǎn)不要有所遺漏。在謀篇布局上，可以針對(duì)這三方面使用三個(gè)段落來(lái)分別進(jìn)行介紹，這樣會(huì)使文章有條理性，層次感。在時(shí)態(tài)選擇上可以使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。此外在寫作時(shí)還要注意運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞以使文章行文連貫，內(nèi)容緊湊。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文章采用三段式結(jié)構(gòu)。第一段介紹網(wǎng)絡(luò)給人們帶來(lái)的好處；第二段介紹網(wǎng)絡(luò)的壞處；最后一段提出了自己的觀點(diǎn)看法。這種段落安排使文章結(jié)構(gòu)分明，層次清晰，給人一目了然的感覺(jué)。文中There is no doubt that we have benefited….. But every coin has two sides.和it's high time the government took effective measures.三個(gè)經(jīng)典的句型不僅起到承上啟下、連接語(yǔ)篇的作用，而且也顯示了作者對(duì)語(yǔ)言較高的靈活運(yùn)用能力。此外，benefit 、consequently、effective等高級(jí)詞匯的使用也提升了作文的檔次。

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