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假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加，刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1、每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2、只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Dear Abby，

How are you? Today I’ve got a wonderful news to tell you. I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my further education. One hundred and twenty students took exam for it, but only a few was chosen and I was one of them. However, my parents are not happy about it. They are strong against me going there. They say it is too far away that they will not see me for a whole year and they are afraid of I will feel lonely. They can’t imagine a girl so young live alone. They ask me study in the capital instead. Then I’ll be able to continue living with them. How can I persuade them to accept the fact I have grown up？

Best wishes,

Jane

【答案】

【1】去掉a

【2】have offered之間加been

【3】exam→exams

【4】was→were

【5】strong→strongly

【6】too→so

【7】of→that

【8】live→living

【9】study前加to

【10】fact后加that

【解析】

試題分析：作者想去澳大利亞深造,但父母因為距離及擔心作者，不同意作者去，作者只好給好友寫信求助。

【1】去掉a 考查不可數名詞。句中news是不可數名詞，不能用a修飾，故去掉a。

【2】have offered之間加been 考查語態(tài)。此處指我被提供了一個獎學金，主語I和動詞offer是被動關系，用現在完成時的被動，故have和offered之間加been。

【3】exam→exams 考查名詞。exam是可數名詞此處指120人參加了考試，故exam---exams.

【4】was→were 考查主謂一致。主語是a few students是復數，故謂語也要用復數形式，故was改為were。

【5】strong→strongly 考查副詞。句中修飾謂語動詞are against“反對”，故要用副詞，故strong改為strongly。

【6】too→so 考查固定句型。句意：他們說澳大利亞是如此遠以至于一年都不能見我。此處是so...that句型，表示“如此……以至于……”，故too改為so。

【7】of→that 考查賓語從句。are afraid of后只能加詞組作賓語，而I will feel lonely是賓語從句，根據從句意思完整，故用that引導，故of改為that。

【8】live→living 考查非謂語動詞。句意：他們無法想象這么小的一個女孩獨自生活。動詞imagine后加動詞-ing形式，故live改為living。

【9】study前加to 考查不定式。ask sb. to do sth.“讓某人做某事”，故study前加to。

【10】fact后加that 考查同位語從句。句中fact和后面I have grown up是同位關系，根據從句意思完整，故用that引導同位語從句，故fact后加that。

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