Question

火熱的高三就在眼前，你準備好了嗎？或許有時候，我們還可以向螞蟻取取經(jīng)呢！請根據(jù)以下提示，并結合你生活中的事例，用英語寫一篇短文。

The ant philosophy is: never give up, look ahead and do whatever you can.

注意：①無須寫標題；

②除詩歌外，文體不限；

③文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱；

④詞數(shù)不少于120，如引用提示語則不計入總字數(shù)。

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

It is universally acknowledged that only with perseverance and optimism can we achieve our goals.

Take my own experience for example. There was a time when I suddenly became interested in playing badminton, but some of my classmates laughed at me saying that I would never play badminton well because I was too fat. No matter what they said, I just kept on practicing almost every day after school. In order to improve my skill, I even consulted some professional players. With two years passing by, I won the champion of our school sports meeting. All the students and teachers congratulated me on my success. Moreover, I became slim and much healthier.

From my experience, I am firmly convinced that it was my determination, self-confidence and never giving-up that help me achieve my success.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達要求根據(jù)提示，結合生活中的事例，用英語寫一篇短文。寫作前首先要正確理解提示信息“The ant philosophy is: never give up, look ahead and do whatever you can.”，挖掘要點，發(fā)揮想象來進行寫作。提煉到的要點應該是遇到困難挫折不放棄，要對未來充滿希望，腳踏實地工作。文章首先可以提出螞蟻的哲學，然后亮出自己的觀點，再結合事例進行論證。寫作時文章應該用第一人稱，使用一般現(xiàn)在時，講解事例時應該使用一般過去時。注意高級詞匯和多種句式的使用，這是文章的得分點所在。

【亮點說明】本文使用了議論文常見的寫作模式-----三段式結構，首先提出論點only with perseverance and optimism can we achieve our goals.，然后用自己的經(jīng)歷來論證，最后歸納總結。文中使用了定語從句There was a time when I suddenly became interested in playing badminton,，讓步狀語從句No matter what they said,和倒裝句only with perseverance and optimism can we achieve our goals.強調句型it was my determination, self-confidence and never giving-up that help me achieve my success.等，增加了文章的亮點。

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