Question

17．我們國(guó)家長(zhǎng)期實(shí)行獨(dú)生子女政策，現(xiàn)在政府將放開(kāi)這一政策，允許夫妻中一方是獨(dú)生子女的家庭生育第二個(gè)孩子，對(duì)此你怎么看．請(qǐng)圍繞以下幾點(diǎn)談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ?
談?wù)勀銓?duì)目前實(shí)施的獨(dú)生子女政策的理解；
對(duì)未來(lái)實(shí)施夫妻中一方是獨(dú)生子女可生育第二個(gè)孩子的政策的想法；
你對(duì)未來(lái)中國(guó)的人口問(wèn)題有何期望，簡(jiǎn)述原因．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
When it is carried out for some time，many people not only see its advantages but also ②disadvantages．
當(dāng)它被實(shí)行了一段時(shí)間后，許多人不僅看到了它的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，而且也看到了它的缺點(diǎn)．
本句是when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句；主句中的并列連詞 not only…but also…"不但…，而且…"在此處連接了兩個(gè)并列的謂語(yǔ)：由于not only中的not與其后的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞不存在否定關(guān)系，故無(wú)需在not前加用助動(dòng)詞．
句型二：
But if their parents have two children，they can share the burden of①taking care of ②their parents．
但是如果他們的父母有兩個(gè)孩子，他們就能分擔(dān)照顧父母的責(zé)任．
本句為if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句；①動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ) share the burden of意為：分擔(dān)…的責(zé)任；②固定短語(yǔ)take care of意為：照顧；由于此處用在介詞of之后，故用taking．

解答 Is it Necessary for Two-child Policy？
China is a great country with the largest population in the world．In order to solve the population problem，our government decides to implement one-child policy．When it is carried out for some time，many people not only see its advantages but also disadvantages．【高分句型一】Thus，people argue that two-child policy should be put into effect．（概述我國(guó)政府決定實(shí)施二胎政策的原因）In my opinion，two-child policy should be carried out．（提出自己的觀點(diǎn)：在我看來(lái)，應(yīng)該實(shí)施二胎政策．）
First of all，two-child policy is the gift for some only child．For some families，maybe the parents are only child and they also can have only child．Put aside the loneliness of their child，when their child grows up and they grow older，their child marry with an only child girl accidentally，the burden on their child and his wife is unimaginable heavy．Their child and his wife have to take care of two old couples．Usually，a young couple looking after an old couple is a little difficult； if the pressure increases twice，how can they stand it？But if their parents have two children，they can share the burden of taking care of their parents．【高分句型二】It would be much better．（站在獨(dú)生子女的角度上論述了實(shí)行二胎政策的好處．）
Secondly，two-child policy can guarantee the number of Chinese population．As the widely spread of one-child policy，some people have changed their conception about giving birth．If they firmly believe one-child policy，there will be more and more DINKs．After several decades，our country will be famous for lack of population．（從我國(guó)人口數(shù)量上論述了實(shí)行二胎政策的必要性．）
In conclusion，one-child policy has out of date．And tow-child policy is necessary．It can solve the problem of nowadays and the future．（重申論點(diǎn)．）

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