Question

12．你校將舉辦校報英語寫作大賽，請以學(xué)生會的名義根據(jù)大賽內(nèi)容擬寫一份英文書面通知：
（1）大賽主題："一封家書"、"我最喜愛的老師"兩個主題任選其一；
（1）字?jǐn)?shù)800左右．
（3）參賽辦法和截止日期．
（4）獎勵辦法．
注意：
（1）詞數(shù)100左右．
（2）可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
（3）開頭語和結(jié)束語已為你寫好．
Notice
Here is good news for you．
In order to improve the students'English writing，an English writing contest will be held by the school newspaper．If you are interested in English writing，please take an active part in it．You have two following themes to choose from．You can write a letter home，telling your parents the life and studies in our school and showing your gratitude to them．Or you can choose to write a composition about your favorite teacher in which you describe his or her good quality and speciality．The words should be around 800．Please email your composition to writingcompetition@126．com before May 22nd，2016．We will invite the foreign teachers to work as judges．The winners will be given a pleasant gift and their compositions will be published on the school newspaper and recommended to English newspapers and magazines for publications．
We are looking forward to your participation．
The Students'Union．

Answer 1

分析 這是一份英文書面通知，根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱，用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)表示比賽目的，參賽辦法和截止日期；用一般將來時表示獎勵辦法．內(nèi)容包括：一比賽目的；二參賽辦法和截止日期；三獎勵辦法．
高分句型：
1．You can write a letter home，telling your parents the life and studies in our school and showing your gratitude to them．句子里telling your parents the life and studies in our school 和 showing your gratitude to them做伴隨狀語，和主語You之間是主動關(guān)系．
你可以寫信回家，告訴父母你在學(xué)校的學(xué)習(xí)和生活，對他們表示你的感激．
2．Or you can choose to write a composition about your favorite teacher in which you describe his or her good quality and speciality．句子里in which 引導(dǎo)定語從句，代指先行詞a composition．
或者你選擇寫一篇關(guān)于你最喜歡的老師的作文，在作文里，你可以描寫他的好品質(zhì)和特別的特點．

解答 Notice
      Here is good news for you． In order to improve the students'English writing，an English writing contest will be held by the school newspaper．（比賽目的）If you are interested in English writing，please take an active part in it．You have two following themes to choose from．You can write a letter home，telling your parents the life and studies in our school and showing your gratitude to them．【高分句型一】Or you can choose to write a composition about your favorite teacher in which you describe his or her good quality and speciality．【高分句型二】The words should be around 800．Please email your composition to writingcompetition@126．com before May 22nd，2016．（參賽辦法和截止日期）We will invite the foreign teachers to work as judges．The winners will be given a pleasant gift and their compositions will be published on the school newspaper and recommended to English newspapers and magazines for publications．（獎勵辦法）
      We are looking forward to your participation．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                  The Students'Union

點評 考查提綱類作文．
在寫作文時，有的考生一味追求文章的完美而千篇一律地用結(jié)構(gòu)復(fù)雜的句型，從而使得文章變的過于華麗反而顯得冗長拖沓，就像是文言文般的"咬文嚼字"，讓評卷教師感到"不太舒服"從而影響作文的得分，適得其反．長句短句各有千秋，簡單句復(fù)合句也是各有特色：長句能夠增加要點的內(nèi)涵，使得句子"枝繁葉茂"，但使用不當(dāng)會有失精準(zhǔn)，運(yùn)用起來不夠靈活；不失時機(jī)地插入短句，會讓文章長短有致，既達(dá)到了結(jié)構(gòu)上的要求，有符合表達(dá)意義上的要求．