Question

13．假設(shè)你是李華，你的朋友Tom原計劃暑假來你所在的城市旅游，為此你提前為他在一家酒店預(yù)定了一個房間，但他來電說因故要推遲一周．請給美籍酒店負責人寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：
1．表示歉意；
2．說明情況；
3．改定日期．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Sir or Madam，
I booked a room in your hotel for my friend Tom yesterday．But I am really sorry to tell you that I want to change my booking now．（高分句型一）
My friend Tom had planned to visit our city this summer vocation．So Room 101 was scheduled for him．However，I was informed yesterday that he had an important thing to deal with，so he couldn't come as planned．（高分句型二）He had to change the booking date for the room．I would appreciate it if you could push the booking date back a week at your earliest convenience．（高分句型三）Thanks again．I hope this will not cause you any trouble．
I am looking forward to your early reply．
Yours sincerely，
LiHua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一封電子郵件，屬于提綱式作文．考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示，認清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時態(tài)．根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來．寫作時注意時態(tài)、語態(tài)的合理運用，主次分明，詳略得當，語言力求準確、簡潔．根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料．同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
【亮點說明】
本文是一封電子郵件，格式正確，內(nèi)容齊全，結(jié)構(gòu)布局合理，同時使用高級句子．I am really sorry to tell you that I want to change my booking now．賓語從句用在句中；My friend Tom had planned to visit our city this summer vocation．這種帶虛擬語氣的過去完成時態(tài)的運用，堪稱經(jīng)典；so he couldn't come as planned．省略句恰到好處；I would appreciate it if you could push the booking date back a week at your earliest convenience．it做形式賓語，后面的從句是真正的賓語．
But I am really sorry to tell you that I want to change my booking now．（高分句型一）
However，I was informed yesterday that he had an important thing to deal with，so he couldn't come as planned．（高分句型二）
I would appreciate it if you could push the booking date back a week at your earliest convenience．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
       I booked a room in your hotel for my friend Tom yesterday．But I am really sorry to tell you that I want to change my booking now．（高分句型一）
       My friend Tom had planned to visit our city this summer vocation．So Room 101 was scheduled for him．However，I was informed yesterday that he had an important thing to deal with，so he couldn't come as planned．（高分句型二）He had to change the booking date for the room．I would appreciate it if you could push the booking date back a week at your earliest convenience．（高分句型三）Thanks again．I hope this will not cause you any trouble．
       I am looking forward to your early reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                              Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．